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The Object of My Obssession

Eyes of pure glass piercing my soul, deeper into my heart until my heart is careened. Lips as soft as silk speak words of life, flowing gently in my ears like a lover's gentle caress. Hands as strong as steel grab hold of mine, clutching at every moment as though to possess me. A man in perfect form fools with my emotions. Daring to control me, I am left wanting. A love so strong endures a lifetime. It overtakes my being and leaves me breathless... and waiting...

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Date: 8/12/2020 2:55:00 AM
Beautifully penned Nicole. Your emotions flow smoothly with that tender touch. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/11/2020 8:25:00 AM
Nice love poem, Nicole. I like the line "until my heart is careened". Congratulations for your win ~ John
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Date: 8/10/2020 5:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nicole :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2020 12:07:00 PM
Good choice of words! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/9/2020 4:06:00 AM
A lovely sensual poem.. lucky man..
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Date: 8/8/2020 3:49:00 PM
This is okay.Sadly I don't have any experience of Love so can't relate
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