The Nurse

Hurrying towards an alley.
Chill air urges no dilly dally.
Breath beneath cape rising.
Inside a woman, in anguish, was writhing.
The husband tried to wipe the beads of sweat,
All in vain, a condition which she tried to forget.
Childbirth pains suddenly revived.
Cape off, the nurse has arrived.

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Date: 8/2/2022 9:55:00 AM
Where would we be without a nurse to care for us when health issues go awry...Delice
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Date: 8/1/2022 8:34:00 AM
Not a great feeling when a child is ready to come and no one there to help. Nicely written my friends. Many blessings and hugs
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Date: 8/1/2022 3:39:00 AM
Victor, well penned, nurses are so important and in demand!
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Date: 7/30/2022 12:33:00 PM
Hi Victor, I love this one, You always manage to tell your tales with such living energy. They do deserve all praise for what they do, my friend. The nurse, the angel who got there. Wonderful write, my friend. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike. A fave.
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Date: 7/30/2022 10:36:00 AM
Love this Poem of aid to those that need it, and recognizing the people such as nurses that make a diligent effort in helping others. Well done Victor enjoyed your write today my firnd...
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Date: 7/30/2022 10:17:00 AM
Where would we be without the dedication of nurses? A very fine poem, Victor. :)
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:02:00 AM
Some of my darkest health problems, Victor, were given the light, when a nurse appeared. Love the poem and its highlight.
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:07:00 AM
- Lovely poem ... hugs from a nurse // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/29/2022 1:32:00 PM
A thoughtful poem for a profession build from the desire to help and care for others. Thanks for sharing this poem with us, Victor. Bill
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Date: 7/29/2022 11:43:00 AM
This nurse is like a combat medic, in the trenches, doing a noble service for humanity, a hero! Robert
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Date: 7/29/2022 9:29:00 AM
Wonderful that we have caring men and women in this world who will take on the nursing profession. I know it is not an easy job especially in these times with new viruses, bacteria, etc. turning up quite often. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2022 7:26:00 AM
A nurse is a birthing woman's angel. Nurses and doctors are the most soothing. Great Poem
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Date: 7/29/2022 6:30:00 AM
Excellent in all sorts of ways! One of your best! Love the opening two lines and then you bring us to the onset of birthing pains. A big fave for me, my friend!
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Date: 7/29/2022 6:26:00 AM
birthing is no easy task, lucky she arrived, nicely penned Victor, have a blessed day !
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Date: 7/29/2022 5:35:00 AM
Great emotive write, Victor--relief in the ending.
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Date: 7/29/2022 4:03:00 AM
A nurse is an angel in a maternity room where a woman goes through birth pangs ! A nurse or a doctor is a comforting presence more than anybody ! A good poem...
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