The Now Continuum

Line of inquiry:
“since thoughts speak in past tenses,
drop mind, rely on senses,
embracing and releasing,
pain pangs and pleasure pleasing” by Unseeking Seeker

I can see God’s hand in all around me:
the sweetness of dawn’s pink; the dusk’s bright sky;
my loved ones’ faces; pets and my plum tree;
mountains to my east and birds that freely fly.
And in my grand kids’ voices I can hear
their joy and sorrow too. God gave me this
that I might comfort them when I am near.
In taste and smell, oh, there is such bliss:
good food; the whiff of flowers on the breeze.
I must embrace my senses, taking part
in using them to grow them with more ease
and feel both using touch as well as heart.
Thus, Now Continuum I do employ,
resulting in my mindfulness and joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Empress Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Back with congratulations on getting placed in seekers contest! Well deserved
Empress Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 12:44 AM
This is so very well written for the line of enquiry sweet andrea, youve written a sonnet and its impressive how youv also used elements of nature to depict your understanding of the line of enquiry in such a sublime manner! I especially love "the sweetness of dawn’s pink; the dusk’s bright sky; my loved ones’ faces; pets and my plum tree" ah! Made my soul warmin reading those, appreciating all that around! Best wishes in the contest! Miss you!!! Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Thanks as always, Ink.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Just beautiful. love it. God bless you with a win. much love, Gina
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Thanks, Gina
George Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Great thoughts, dear Andrea. There is so much around us to be thankful for and glad if we rightly use our senses. A beautiful sonnet.
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Thank you, Valsa
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