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The Note

I was corner-stoned by many of you. The note was dotted with a dash. But this note was an ultimate smash. I found a peephole and peeped through. I found a bird gave him the note and away he flew, Across the deserts and the valleys he was there in a flash, Across the rivers and Oceans he made a great big splash. He made it to the shore, but the note he began to chew. He passed a timely test, And his belly was full, He did not stop to rest, The note he had to pull. The bird landed on the Oceans shore, Singing praises of his rugged chore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/11/2009 7:06:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 8/11/2009 6:37:00 AM
Very imaginative, but the bird did fail? even though he wails to others victory? this is great, nicely written
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