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The Noisy Rainstorm

The sky it growled and Sucked the ocean into the Air, throwing tantrum.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2018 8:02:00 PM
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I see a tsunami, and it is exactly like this.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/12/2018 5:02:00 AM
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It does seem like a tantrum. I guess even Sky can get angry if it wants to...I'm not going to attempt stifling it.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/3/2018 8:09:00 PM
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Your imagery is vibrant and powerful, M.L. You captured my imagination with this wondrous haiku. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/3/2018 9:43:00 PM
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That's what it reminds me of, especially when the thunder shakes the ground.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/3/2018 10:34:00 AM
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Awesome imagery. Well done, ML.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/3/2018 9:43:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Line.

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