The Nilands of Tonawanda

Siblings fight for peace
unknown horrors they now face
theatres of war
fallen, in recognition 
we must save the surviving 







"Saving Private Ryan"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:29 PM
A good, poetic and thought-provoking piece, James. Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.
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May 27, 2011 at 10:51 AM
enjoyed reading this one James, a great piece of work and thank you for reading and commenting on Rain Drops Making Love.
Brown Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:51 AM
Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today James. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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May 26, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Your poem is powerful an extaordinarily well written, James. Although the movie was too gory for my taste, I am glad that efforts are made to bring our soldiers home. There's a candidate for president who spent 8 years captive in Vietnam. When he landed in the states, his first words were, "Thank you for bringing me home." I hate to think of how many POWs have suffered in the past. Excellent poem, James. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, James. Good luck
Roberts Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 2:55 PM
great job, good luck in the contest
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