The Nightmare

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                                         Being trapped in the poultry pen
                                    With one mad rooster and an old hen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Haha oh dear how sad, rooster so bad, run run run :) love it babe, xo, Don
Long Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 11:48 AM
been there it can be a bear.. nicely written cory
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Oh, that is GOOD, sara!!!
Semeniuk Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 2:44 PM
There's something about your poetry that never fails me. Quite often I fight to understand poetry but your writing just makes sense in every way. Complication often seems to interfere as a result of trying to write but that's never the case with you because it all comes across so naturally. It's so obvious that you love writing and you hold a piece of yourself within your pen. That's a beautiful thing! Always a pleasure to read your work!!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 4:05 PM
haha..clever and cute ..utterly creative Sara.. put a smile on my face in this sorrowful time for me luv..thankxx...
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June 12, 2011 at 2:28 PM
WOW! SARA, I'M SMILING AT THIS ONE,, THANKS FOR SHARING,..P.D.
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June 12, 2011 at 12:49 PM
What a hoot! So funny, Sara. Love this couplet. Thanks for your kind words. Love, Carolyn
Riley Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Alot said in a few words. I have been in the chicken pen with a mad rooster, very strong expression. Well penned, good work Judy
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June 12, 2011 at 6:42 AM
lol,what a nightmare..... seems we are both in dream land this morning...lol.....enjoyed... always Michael
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