The Nightmare

. Being trapped in the poultry pen With one mad rooster and an old hen

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Don Johnson

Date: 6/17/2011 6:42:00 PM

Haha oh dear how sad, rooster so bad, run run run :) love it babe, xo, Don

Cory Long

Date: 6/14/2011 11:48:00 AM

been there it can be a bear.. nicely written cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2011 11:12:00 PM

Oh, that is GOOD, sara!!!

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 6/13/2011 2:44:00 PM

There's something about your poetry that never fails me. Quite often I fight to understand poetry but your writing just makes sense in every way. Complication often seems to interfere as a result of trying to write but that's never the case with you because it all comes across so naturally. It's so obvious that you love writing and you hold a piece of yourself within your pen. That's a beautiful thing! Always a pleasure to read your work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 4:05:00 PM

haha..clever and cute ..utterly creative Sara.. put a smile on my face in this sorrowful time for me luv..thankxx...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2011 2:28:00 PM

WOW! SARA, I'M SMILING AT THIS ONE,, THANKS FOR SHARING,..P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 12:49:00 PM

What a hoot! So funny, Sara. Love this couplet. Thanks for your kind words. Love, Carolyn

Judy Riley

Date: 6/12/2011 7:49:00 AM

Alot said in a few words. I have been in the chicken pen with a mad rooster, very strong expression. Well penned, good work Judy

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/12/2011 6:42:00 AM

lol,what a nightmare..... seems we are both in dream land this morning...lol.....enjoyed... always Michael