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The Nightmare

The atramentous night was without light. Terror pursued the frightened running man. And got closer the harder that he ran. He screamed his fear into the Stygian night. The dark was broken by something blacker. At first indistinct but was growing near. The man was running in obvious fear. He fled as from an unseen attacker. In panic he turned to impose a ban. The shapeless pursuer stopped and congealed. As it did its frightful face was revealed. He found that it was from himself he ran.

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Date: 8/8/2024 7:19:00 PM
Okay, running from yourself is difficult indeed. :) He needs to stand still, that way, he's able to catch himself. Just sayin'. :) This is interesting and creative.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/9/2024 7:17:00 AM
Yes, I completely agree. Always be true to who you are. When facing trials within, deal with them and try to move on.
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Lanier Thomas
Date: 8/8/2024 10:33:00 PM
:) Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. The trouble with people is that they always run from themselves and who they really are, I think.
Date: 8/6/2024 10:42:00 AM
Oh my that is a long way to run lol
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Lanier Thomas
Date: 8/6/2024 9:44:00 PM
I guess you can't outrun yourself.
Date: 7/30/2024 5:50:00 AM
Well, the good news is they should be of equal speed so no chance of getting caught, right? Interesting write
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Lanier Thomas
Date: 7/30/2024 7:59:00 AM
Hahaha! Yes, they should. He comes face to face with himself after running from himself for so long. A lot of people have to face themselves, sooner or later.

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