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The Night Was Over

After a rainy night,
The sun rose shining bright.
Tree leaves coruscated, 
And luxuriant turf covered the vale.

How sweet the grass so full of dew.
Birds left their nooks,
Twittering around the skies

How dazzling the vale 
Reflecting a glorious sight.
A small rill tumbled down 
The rugged hill tumbling over smooth pebbles.

Mossy growths sparkled 
With ferns and silverweed now sprouted new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 4:47 AM
Nature looks so elegant with luxuriant green especially after the first few rains. Beautiful description of the grassy vale and the small crystalline rill.
Milgate Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Enjoyed this lovely descriptive poem
Bayles Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Very descriptive, Victor.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:22 AM
It’s wonderful to wake to a sunny day when the night before it rained, then rained some more. A beautiful picture you’ve painted with words Victor… Belle
Rose  Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:54 AM
I love your optimistic view Victor :)
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:36 AM
- The summer release rain when needed, but has penchant for sunshine :) - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Great imagery created Victor.... Summer rains bring cheer. God bless... ~ Ani
Buehler Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:34 AM
We had torrential rain last night, but now the sun is shining bright and everything looks so pretty. Your beautiful poem captures the aftermath of rain so charmingly. Blessings and hugs.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Love rain, and love the morning "after a rainy night" - pretty description with alluring images. BW ~ Mala
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 6:13 AM
This work of art is beyond all good looks, Victor, and you've perfectly expressed it with your imagery and words. This is one of my favorites.Blessings my good friend
Ball Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Oh sounds lovely. I do like to walk through the park in early morning or along the hillside. I miss walking through the meadows and long to return to country life. God Bess, JB
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Splendid vocabulary paints elegant images--superbly done, Victor.
May Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Beautiful images appear after the rains, Very nicely penned Victor
Skelly Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:05 AM
A rainfall works magic on the counrtyside, everything seems so vibrant...Delice
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Everything smells fresh after a rainfall, love the imagery in this one Victor. Tom
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 3:08 AM
such a beautiful scene you have created Victor... enjoyed the read...hugs
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:43 AM
Loved the scene you paint with your words, Victor:) nice and refreshing after the rain:)
Seeker Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:07 AM
Superbo! Beautiful pic too
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 10:58 PM
what intense imagery Victor, this is truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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