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After a rainy night, The sun rose shining bright. Tree leaves coruscated, And luxuriant turf covered the vale. How sweet the grass so full of dew. Birds left their nooks, Twittering around the skies How dazzling the vale Reflecting a glorious sight. A small rill tumbled down The rugged hill tumbling over smooth pebbles. Mossy growths sparkled With ferns and silverweed now sprouted new.

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Date: 12/20/2022 4:47:00 AM
Nature looks so elegant with luxuriant green especially after the first few rains. Beautiful description of the grassy vale and the small crystalline rill.
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Date: 7/3/2021 1:59:00 PM
Enjoyed this lovely descriptive poem
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Date: 7/1/2021 8:02:00 PM
Very descriptive, Victor.
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Date: 6/30/2021 10:22:00 AM
It’s wonderful to wake to a sunny day when the night before it rained, then rained some more. A beautiful picture you’ve painted with words Victor… Belle
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Date: 6/29/2021 11:54:00 AM
I love your optimistic view Victor :)
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Date: 6/29/2021 11:36:00 AM
- The summer release rain when needed, but has penchant for sunshine :) - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:56:00 AM
Great imagery created Victor.... Summer rains bring cheer. God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:34:00 AM
We had torrential rain last night, but now the sun is shining bright and everything looks so pretty. Your beautiful poem captures the aftermath of rain so charmingly. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 6/29/2021 9:07:00 AM
Love rain, and love the morning "after a rainy night" - pretty description with alluring images. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 6/29/2021 6:13:00 AM
This work of art is beyond all good looks, Victor, and you've perfectly expressed it with your imagery and words. This is one of my favorites.Blessings my good friend
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Date: 6/29/2021 5:59:00 AM
Oh sounds lovely. I do like to walk through the park in early morning or along the hillside. I miss walking through the meadows and long to return to country life. God Bess, JB
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Date: 6/29/2021 5:56:00 AM
Splendid vocabulary paints elegant images--superbly done, Victor.
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Date: 6/29/2021 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful images appear after the rains, Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 6/29/2021 5:05:00 AM
A rainfall works magic on the counrtyside, everything seems so vibrant...Delice
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Date: 6/29/2021 4:17:00 AM
Everything smells fresh after a rainfall, love the imagery in this one Victor. Tom
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Date: 6/29/2021 3:08:00 AM
such a beautiful scene you have created Victor... enjoyed the read...hugs
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Date: 6/29/2021 1:43:00 AM
Loved the scene you paint with your words, Victor:) nice and refreshing after the rain:)
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Date: 6/29/2021 1:07:00 AM
Superbo! Beautiful pic too
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Date: 6/28/2021 10:58:00 PM
what intense imagery Victor, this is truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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