The Night Visitor

Last night I got a visit from a historical figure 
I couldn’t believe my eyes; I was humbled, I
thought I was hallucinating, was it a transfigure?

Many questions bombarded my mind but why
dominated each question, I was confused;
“ Don't stand there mystified; time ticks by.”

How were you able to stand when hate infused?
“ I was mandated to walk in a thing called love,”
Didn't that cause you to get used and abused?

“ Yes, but my actions gave folks hope in spite of,
all of the negativity that dominated their minds;
positivity sparks change; it may also shove.”

Your legacy remains; however, some are blind
“ That's true; I came because you're woke.”
Pardon me, may I somehow get reassigned?

“ You may decline; you're chosen, I must invoke, 
 my mantle is already in place for you to wear.”
Chosen? I didn't ask to be; please don't provoke.

“ I shall not; I came so that you will be aware
of things that stir the depths of your soul.”
We didn't talk much, was your visit to scare?

“ I said what was most important; my only goal.”
Can I take some time to process somehow?
“ Time isn't guaranteed; you have no control.”

This is too much for me; it seems like a vow
“ It is; I must leave you now; goodbye,
make a wise choice; put your hand to the plow.”

Wait, I need more time; everything is so unclear
“ You’ll be fine, just be  brave and have no fear.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/8/2021 4:59:00 PM
WoW! Many of us pray for a visit like that. What an honor no matter how terrifying. This is so well and carefully thought out. Great write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/7/2021 11:28:00 PM
Very well written. Held me to the end by the mysterious visitor. ~~
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Date: 2/7/2021 6:34:00 PM
This is a marvelous encounter of the 'supernatural kind,' Alexis. I love the way you kept the mystery going throughout the poem to the very end. Powerful write and superb contest entry, methinks. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 2/7/2021 6:21:00 PM
I love those kind of encounter , they are normally personal and life changing, I hope it was for you. Thanks for sharing such a powerful clarified moment.
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Date: 2/7/2021 3:36:00 PM
Nice write as usual. I don't have any idea who that historical figure could have been.
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Date: 2/7/2021 1:06:00 PM
Quite a dialogue, Alexis, with a powerful inspiration. Great creative write my friend dwelling in supernatural. Kudos for this write.
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Date: 2/7/2021 11:35:00 AM
Quite a spiritual dream you had Alexis. Tom
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Date: 2/7/2021 10:45:00 AM
That would be quite the dream to have. I don't think I would want such a dream . Much responsibility to take on!! Way to go writing for the contest, Alexis.
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