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The Night It All Went Down

You left so fast with no goodbye i wish you were here so i am not scared before i left i told a lie i said im sorry but i cant go. Its been so long since that day It makes me feel bad that i could have helped close to two years and i still regret what i had said how could i have been so mean the one lie i had told you changed my world forever how can i be so oblivious do my eyes decive me i cant change whats happened now your fun and mine weren’t the same now i am okay.....you’re gone i could of been with you but instead i ditched you for this i regret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2009 1:23:00 PM
There is a lot of feeling in this poem. You did a good job expressing yourself. Isn't life sometimes like that old cliche' ...it looks greener on the other side of the fence... until you get there. Do you wish you could hop right back over? Sometimes you can, with forgiveness. Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup.
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