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The Night Has Eyes



Your splendiferous day is finally complete.
Your grateful heart smiles, with joy replete.

Knowing you survived this day’s travails.
Unecessary, for you to get any hurrrahs and hails.

In your serene bed, beneath a soft quilt, you retire.
Knowing you did your best, and in some hearts, lit a fire

Outside, you observe, the deep onyx skies has eyes.
That love and care for you, ‘tis absolutely no disguise.

You surely are a child of a stupendous, watchful, universe.
Sent to planet earth, to express your vivid truth in verse!


                                        1/11/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Jones Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 2:00 AM
The poem is amazing and the photo fabulous! I don’t know how to do photos. Congratulations on this poem being on the best 100 soup poems list!
Romios Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 2:40 AM
Hi Karen! Wow! I honestly forgot I have written this phone. I read it like someone else wrote it I know I should but I just forget and move on and do other creations. Some great, so that’s so great but that’s OK.. I like this kind of poem that expresses gratitude and peace. Lord knows in this world we need inner peace so very much. I’m so happy you likedthisLpangie cx
Eagle Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 9:49 AM
I enjoyed this poem. It has a melody in the verses that you have a unique talent to bring to life.
Romios Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Hello! You are right about the lyricism in this write. I always think I have no talent ar all. Perhaps, I will get over this, perhaps, never. But for sure, I’d rather be me,than a prancing Prima Donna! Most poets…here are realists, few Prima Donnas. I only know of one…a male!))) merci, Pangie
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January 13, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Dear Pangie, back again for another read my lovely. I’m going to fave it as well as I forgot on my last visit. Then, I can read it often at night :) Yes, I have experienced Deja vu quite a lot throughout my life and can sense things at times( inner sense) I think this is one of your best poems I’ve read so far! Absolutely delightful and enchanting. Sweet dreams for now dear, sweet friend. Hugs xx
Romios Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Hi Christima! Please be assured that I am not wanting to have a big head! By that I mean,arrogance! I constantly doubt that my poems are any good. it’s been that way since I started writing four years ago. After over 3000 poems, I do have my favorites. Poets no which ones are the best.. so we both have déjà vu and our sensitive. That is a good thing.. it’s a good idea to read favorites that you chose! So sweet dreams to you and God bless you for making this a favorite. I think God helps us in our writing too, if we ask him.. I am not that arrogant to assume I’m perfect. There are people who think they are God’s gift to the universe.. I stay away from North Poets, I like the humble ones who do their best. Thank you for being so sweet and kind.. panagiota
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January 13, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Wonderful title of interesting well enjoyed read!
Romios Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Hugs to you Abullah. May your nights be blessed with the magic of a star-filled universe that blesses you With peace amd strength Panagiota
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January 13, 2024 at 10:28 AM
I like. This is a poem with a new twist on 'the night has eyes'. The restful sleeps for me is 50/50.
Romios Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Oh, thats just hrreat, Hilds!. The night offers multiple ideas to write about, shippingi think the night is an enchantress for poete. Pangie . I slep till 10 a.M , a first for me. Thank you, dead , Hilda.
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January 12, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Bravissimo, Pangie! I love night poems and this one is exceptional. A FAVE. Have a grand night, good friend. xxoo
Romios Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 5:07 PM
I about fainted! You amd Kim honored me with a FAVE! I am humbled me forver… i am ever so grateful,to you both! Do, do remember to have in a Higher Power and the Universe. I know You both do already! Merci beacoup! Pangie
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January 12, 2024 at 1:51 PM
I enjoyed your creative/wonderful write/great picture. Enjoy your weekend... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Romios Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 5:16 PM
Hi Paula Poetess here I am responding to toue comment at 5:15 pm! I was working on another creartion, please do excuse me.Thank you.)) amazing that another weekend is here, Merci. Pangie
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January 12, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Dear Pangie, this is such a wonderful poem dear one with a captivating title alongside the picture. It flows perfectly with great rhyming. Reading,’ the deep onyx skies has eyes’ makes retiring for the night so enchanting and so blessed to be a child of a watchful universe. I shall think of this heartwarming poem later, which fascinated me, when I look to the night sky to say goodnight. Thank you. Hugs to you dear Pangie for a peaceful, blessed 2024 xx
Romios Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Christina.. have you ever heard of déjà vu?? I was thinking of you last night and here you are this morning. Amazing. I hope all is going well with you. You know I wasn’t sure how this would go over at all and I am so glad that you are one of the people who like it. I found it very creative., myself, yes!! Think of any part of the poem that is a source of peace ror comfort to you. I would feel like I did something in the universe that made a difference. Your comments are always so embracing and loving I feel like you’re hugging me)). Not just here to get to comment back.. remember the watchful universe and yes,do pen verse. Merci , Pangie
Fisher Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 5:27 PM
The title is so inviting, and I enjoyed the poem you craftly put together. I'm glad for you and other poets who are here to share their verse.
Romios Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 6:43 PM
May I say David, glad you liked both the title I am glad you are here! We all differ in whhy we are here and in the wasyys we write. The last line says it all.”to express ‘your’ vivid truth in verse.” Thank you for gracing tis poem with your views,. Stay warm, have hot cocoa…mmm! Merci beaucouo, Pangie
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January 11, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Another masterpiece, Pangie! This should be made into a song! Bob H
Romios Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Hi Bob! Alas, I am lyricist but not a musician. I don’t know music! Hope you and yours are well. Merci, Pangie
Lawless Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 1:08 PM
"to express your vivid truth" Ah, Pangy, vivid....a word not often associated with truth.....nicely done...
Romios Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Wonderful to hear from you John… If one is speaking their heart? The truth is mightilty vivid. ! High oratort is unecessary in poetry and blunding as a snowstorm. Think of Frost . Simple words so viviidly true., eg, “ Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening.” HNY, John, Pangiota
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