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The Night

The Dawn The Day - withers away At the edge of twilight It waits - The Night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/30/2014 2:19:00 PM
Ahhh! I love the transition from dawn to night, done in a few lines, yet captivating. Deserves a top rating. // paul
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Date: 7/29/2014 10:25:00 PM
Pretty, short and sweet..I like. BG
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Lyn Murray
Date: 7/30/2014 1:52:00 PM
Thank you! Can't wait to read yours! Kinda getting behind. Will be much easier when publisher is through raking me over the coals with edits. ;-)

Book: Shattered Sighs