The Night

The Dawn

The Day - withers away

At the edge of twilight

It waits - 

The Night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Ahhh! I love the transition from dawn to night, done in a few lines, yet captivating. Deserves a top rating. // paul
Gorelick Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Pretty, short and sweet..I like. BG
Murray Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:52 PM
Thank you! Can't wait to read yours! Kinda getting behind. Will be much easier when publisher is through raking me over the coals with edits. ;-)
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