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Seven-Ten

I invented this form and call it (Seven-Ten), (meant to be centered). There should be a distinctive look. A non rhythm, twenty two line blank verse poem with (190 Syllables) with the following count -7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7

         

Do you fear what is coming does the future frighten you? Earth is entering a whole new cycle, for Greenland's glaciers are destined to melt and all that water needs someplace to go. Climate change is here to stay, no matter what skeptics say. Global warming has encompassed the Earth, Nature doesn't adhere to Man's boundaries when She chooses to rearrange planets. We are running out of time, yet far too few seem to care. These climatic changes are happening; it's out of the realm of might or could be, and it's a process that can't be reversed! We are the generation that'll feel its impact begin. It won't be long before it all goes wrong subtle climate changes are first to show, but they'll ultimately overwhelm us. Must the next generation shoulder this burden alone?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/6/2018 11:23:00 AM
Disturbing concerns for sure, Emile. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2018 1:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2018 5:56:00 PM
I feel so sorry for the next generation, Emile. This is a very thoughtful poem. I am seeing several poems of this theme around the site today but do not recall a contest about it. Maybe there is a contest for global warming?
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Date: 3/5/2018 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I don't think there is a contest for global warming...not a bad idea though...I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2018 5:55:00 PM
emile, I am so happy I earned a placement this time in your contest. thanks so much for the inspiration. LEt me read your new poem now.
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Date: 3/5/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, you earned your spot my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/4/2018 4:33:00 PM
A nice form with much to say!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/4/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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