The Newborn

She gave birth to a bouncing baby boy Too soon dropped by a nurse in employ He hit the floor Bounced out the door And was found in the next room with a toy

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/17/2017 10:42:00 AM

Indeed, they grow so fast. Good limerick, Pat.

Pat Adams
Date: 11/17/2017 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Line. I'm going to go out on a limb and say you are a limerick fan!! Could be way off!.....80)......Pat

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2017 9:23:00 PM

So soon they find an open door and toys. So cute!

Pat Adams
Date: 10/13/2017 7:22:00 AM

Yeah, come to think of it, that wasn't a very good place to be having babies I guess.................80)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 10/12/2017 8:47:00 PM

Thank God he didn't get severely hurt and bounced back quickly lol! Cute fun one Pat!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 10/13/2017 7:20:00 AM

Ha! Good one!! I didn't even think of bounced back quickly or I might have used it in the poem. Oh well, save it for later I guess..........80)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/12/2017 8:00:00 PM

Oh... that was ...so ...cute. It made me smile. Have a nice evening my friend.

Pat Adams
Date: 10/13/2017 7:17:00 AM

Glad to hear it. Actually I can almost see that sideways smile in your avatar!!..........................80)

Kevin Shaw

Date: 10/12/2017 5:38:00 PM

Fun Limerick Pat, need to get rid of that Nurse though, regards, Kevin

Pat Adams
Date: 10/13/2017 7:14:00 AM

Yeah, hard to find good nurses for your poems now-a-days!!......................80)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2017 4:49:00 PM

OUCH! :-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 10/13/2017 7:13:00 AM

Yeah. I often wondered if that happened to me when I was born. That would explain a lot!.........80)