The Newborn

She gave birth to a bouncing baby boy
Too soon dropped by a nurse in employ
He hit the floor
Bounced out the door
And was found in the next room with a toy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Indeed, they grow so fast. Good limerick, Pat.
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Line. I'm going to go out on a limb and say you are a limerick fan!! Could be way off!.....80)......Pat
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:23 PM
So soon they find an open door and toys. So cute!
Adams Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Yeah, come to think of it, that wasn't a very good place to be having babies I guess.................80)
Hoffman Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Thank God he didn't get severely hurt and bounced back quickly lol! Cute fun one Pat!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Ha! Good one!! I didn't even think of bounced back quickly or I might have used it in the poem. Oh well, save it for later I guess..........80)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Oh... that was ...so ...cute. It made me smile. Have a nice evening my friend.
Adams Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:17 AM
Glad to hear it. Actually I can almost see that sideways smile in your avatar!!..........................80)
Shaw Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Fun Limerick Pat, need to get rid of that Nurse though, regards, Kevin
Adams Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Yeah, hard to find good nurses for your poems now-a-days!!......................80)
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 4:49 PM
OUCH! :-) hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Yeah. I often wondered if that happened to me when I was born. That would explain a lot!.........80)
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