Phil Boy Poet I do not know?

The New Kid

THE NEW KID.

I hope I will be welcomed here.
         I am 15.  (((((((   < ---not 15 anymore 17 …
I hear all ages are permitted
My mother told me to do something different 
With my life. 
Here I am. 
Hope to survive 
I will try hard to use my brain another way.
My poetry will not be outstanding.
Maybe not even read. 
Till than I hope to make new friends

 Pease and love to all

      Phil J.

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Jay Loveless October 22, 2010 at 9:34 AM Im 17, and from that first one i read, your really not a bad writer...if you dont mind me asking, what ways did you use your mind before? its iight if thats too personal a question. Im just a curious lil girl lol peace B boy

Susan Mills July 22, 2010 at 8:35 AM Welcome Baby Boy! What a whimsical poem here. Enjoy!

Raul Moreno June 7, 2010 at 1:09 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup BB, I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul

Michaela Dowdy May 6, 2010 at 6:15 PM hey, I'm only 14 so i too hope all ages are welcomed lol. I think you'll like it on here,it's my exscape. *Michaela

Michaela Dowdy May 6, 2010 at 6:13 PM hey, I'm only 14 so i too hope all ages are welcomed lol. I think you'll like it on here,it my exscape. *Michaela

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2010 at 11:48 AM Welcome, baby boy, kind of cool name! As you can see, already you have many admirers! LUv, andrea

Billy Thekidster April 27, 2010 at 9:44 AM Welcome BB. From BILLYtheKidster not P D.

Audrey Castaneda April 26, 2010 at 8:03 AM i think i know who dis is... is it who i think it is

Gareth James April 11, 2010 at 2:20 AM Hi Baby Boy, with poetry, it is the reader who judges, BUT it is not to say they are right! I started writing 2 months ago and have entered a no. of contests. The more you write, the more inspiration will flow. The poets on the soup are VERY encouraging, they, we will help as much as we can. Poetry is unique, in all forms. Welcome

Cecil Hickman April 11, 2010 at 12:20 AM Welcome and have fun writing I wish you all the best in the future,,you have come to a place that is warm and caring and also filled with some awsome talent for sure,,just like you,,,,,Blessings..cecil

Joyce Johnson April 8, 2010 at 5:37 PM Welcome to our corner. I am sure we will enjoy reading your poetry. Just follow the rules and you will be okay. Your mother sounds like a wise woman. Love, Joyce

Jay Loveless April 8, 2010 at 11:23 AM Whas up chulo, thank you for your comment (: and welcome, to whats become my home. Im 16, and yes, all ages are permitted. And Ill deff read every one of your poems and help you on anything if youd like ^^...its weird, and dont take this the wrong way please, but i have a good feeling about you. My friends call me Rain. Peace.

Lynette Chachere April 8, 2010 at 7:34 AM well, I believe you made the right choice to come to poetrysoup.you may grow in many ways, bigger than you think. you made a great choice.(: im only two years older.i hope you have a wonderful time here. -Always&Forever Lynette

Dr.Ram Mehta April 8, 2010 at 4:30 AM Welcome Boy baby. I enjoyed you poem

Faleshia Murphy April 7, 2010 at 8:40 PM well baby boy nice write and of course as one of the new kids on the block your poetry is of course welcomed keep writting your mom is right you can have fun and stay out of trouble here at the soup good luck faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 7, 2010 at 7:41 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Baby Boy ..its a Family of great poets and now u are one too... enjoy your stay with us and continue to share your creative writes..luv.. "Sweetheart

Royal Trevino April 7, 2010 at 7:36 PM Well baby boy, welcome:)... nice introduction, hope you enjoy this site... and thanks a bunch for reading my writes... i'm only seventeen and i barely started writing... well trying lol, it's fun, anyways have fun!!

Doris Culverhouse April 7, 2010 at 5:25 PM enjoyed your intro, keep sharing with us. Welcome to the soup!!

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2010 at 5:23 PM All ages are welcome here, Baby Boy, and it's great to have you on board. A 12-year-old girl posted a poem a few months ago and it received many wonderful comments. You'll find other teens here too and I'm glad you mom encouraged you to find a creative outlet. This is an excellent choice. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Best wishes, Carolyn

James Fraser April 7, 2010 at 4:48 PM I hope you enjoy your stay on the Soup, there is so much to write about, so many subjects, topics and themes. Its always a good idea to view and comment on as many people as possible. But always leave time for writing. It will give you inspiration, as they will learn from you >> James

Skat A April 7, 2010 at 4:22 PM hOPE YOU LIKE IT HERE !