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The New Guy

so i meet a guy today he's 16 he goes to Jefferson High School he's awesomely attracting and very sweet i hope to see him in person to person cause he seems like an awesome guy. But i found a flaw in him that flaw would be that he gets mad easily so i have to work on that later with him. But it's just one flaw that he has and the rest is perfectly fine so he's my new guy and I'm starting to think he maybe the one.

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Date: 3/21/2011 4:11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kimberly. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2011 8:14:00 PM
i like it put it doesnt seem like a poem it seems more like your telling a story type of thing
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Date: 3/19/2011 6:51:00 PM
nice write on the new guy, Kimberly
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