The Nemesis of Deborah

She saw the face of Judas in him.
The bearded kiss festered no truth
and the metallic breath
exhaled putrid faithfulness.
The trampled petals spoor no lusting stares, 
redolent no more
even as the tongue creeps by the shoulders.

The razors have summoned from the stinking room!
A slit in the neck 
could rhythmically go by the thrusts unnoticed
But the chorus of the beasts
as shrill as the gongs of hell
maimed vengeance yet
not in the loss of blood will you die.
Not in my hands.

His demonic pleasures went on as the voodoo doll
resurrected in the beat of my own gongs.
Keep stirring as this spindle rouses my anathema!
his chest hairs
pint of blood
vulture’s beak
stallion’s tails
bobcat’s eye
dead evergreen
Deborah’s tears.
Stir and stir and stir!
Murmur satan’s prayer
mana mana mana boo!
ruba ruba ruba hoo!
Count the sands of the transient hourglass
expiring ‘fore tic tac sound.
Now her man froze,
bulging eyes, blackened pulse!


‘tis freedom, Deborah!

Free.

Doomed.



©03-06-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/26/2013 8:54:00 PM
May paglalagyan pa ba ang comment ko. Ahaha! Daming fans. Nice work. I'll keep reading. Thanks.
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Date: 3/23/2013 8:24:00 PM
a dramatic and vivid poem! 'congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/23/2013 5:23:00 PM
Gleen, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda
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Date: 3/9/2013 8:01:00 PM
Oh so gruesome, gave me the shivers to wade though all the gore and terror. You have a streak of gothic in you that leaks into your poems. I enjoyed!
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Date: 3/10/2013 6:11:00 PM
This is by far the best comment I have ever received! Thanks soooo much, Ms. Elizabeth!
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