The Naked Walls

The naked walls of my shower room
Keep the stories that have never been told
Keep my crying and all my attempts to find myself

You can hear my scream in the water 
You can feel my pain in the gutter
I can't breathe, I'm unable to weather the storm

The naked walls of my tiny bedroom 
Keep the image of ideal humble girl
Who took every punch and never talked back

You can see heart's parts in the corner
You can touch soul's pool of its owner
I can't breathe,  I'm unable to weather the storm

The naked walls of my music room
Keep a secret of my fails and triumphs 
still remember how I came short of hopes

Every string is a headline of my story
Every note is my way of saying sorry
I'm alive, but still unable to weather the storm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Balaieva Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 2:42 AM
My friend Vlada helped me greatly with a melody for this lyrics: https://soundcloud.com/rona-kranker/the-naked-walls
Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Hi Alisa, I found your poem to be very compelling and beautifully expressive of sadness, pain and inner turmoil. Your poetic heart write with lovely style and substance and i truly enjoyed your poem today :)
Balaieva Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:47 AM
Hi dear Susan, Thank you for your kind words. That's important for me.
Swartz Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Very powerful words! Another great piece. You must be a survivor Alisa. A talented survivor with much to say.
Balaieva Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 12:03 AM
Thank you, James. I appreciate your words.
Michael Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Good morning Alisa...I enjoyed your poem this morning...Do you play music? I measure my life by it...most times I fall short...Anyway, be good today. Alive Away... wonderful day to you
Balaieva Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Hi Arturo. Thank you for kind words. I sing. So when I'm singing,I'm creating. That's easy for me to compose something with the singing. All the love
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