The Naked Truth - Sequel From Another Sequel

The Naked Truth – Sequel From Another Sequel



he strutted around like a brute
crammed in a too tight bathing suit
but on its release
It weren’t no smooth peach
just a wrinkled piece of old fruit


©John G. Lawless
4/1/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 7:00 PM
hahaha. GREAT job here. I notice lately Soupers are doing better with limericks!!
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 2:49 PM
ha ha ha great one John I have read some fabulous sequels to my original limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 11:55 AM
I resemble that!
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