Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

- the Naked Truth -

We are all brothers and sisters born without hate 
Naked we were born to earth with purity and innocence as Lily 

Love has no barriers beyond our earthly grasp 
Right actions coming from the right setting, it starts from within 

Sometimes we feel we are living inside a bubble 
To live a good life, we must think, speak and act correctly 

Destiny paints our divine promise colors a rainbow 
Everything's really just small adjustments in your life 

The search for the true love with joy and confidence in this world 
Let your light shine bright, love inside the heart last forever 

Of life our guiding angels a choir heavenly glamor 
Angels over flowing universe with its clean and deep strength 


Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 
11.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Maurice Yvonne April 4, 2015 at 8:47 AM I read this on the other side I loved it then and I love it now.

Bl Devnath April 1, 2015 at 4:47 PM Beautiful collab and congrats to both of you. Nicely expressed a nice message. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Constance La France March 31, 2015 at 3:34 PM liam, you an Anne Lise did a wonderful job together writing this beautiful poem, A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .

Robert Lindley March 30, 2015 at 7:09 PM Super 7 on this one. Congrats to you both. Message and flow are exceptional. Bravoooooooo!!!! Liam and Anne

James Peranteau March 30, 2015 at 3:25 PM Well, I came to take a peeps tah see what kind of writes you express, seeing you did a collab with a poet I knows and seen, yet again another fine collab betwixt the both of you ! Great write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week.....much love, james

Dorian Petersen Potter March 30, 2015 at 2:41 PM Hello Liam and Anne-Lise!Very beautiful pens!Another wonderful collaboration from you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!A huge 7 +++to each!A very inspiring uplifting piece about true love,dreams,hopes,friendship,kindness,respect,love,forgiveness,not hating, hurting,saying and spreading lies,not judging and destroying peoples reputations and lives with lies,this is a terrible nightmare,just so horrible when people do this to others anywhere.Excellent poem you've written with a very beautiful positive message.smiling.Enjoyed it!:)Truly mighty golden pens!Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxoxD.^O^

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2015 at 1:51 PM Lots of heavenly thoughts in this one,Liam. If only all mankind could grasp the idea of a world with love!

Eileen Manassian March 30, 2015 at 1:42 PM Two of my favorite people. :) You two are a sweet writing duo. Sending you both lots of hugs. :) Liam...nice profile pic. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2015 at 12:32 PM - Always the truth ..... friendship without the truth is of zero value - (transferred to my "collection") - Hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid April 6, 2015 at 7:15 AM so very true anne lise thank you kindly for the pleasure of writing with you dear pal wishing you a blessed week passing you a warm smile