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THE MYSTIC MAZE

The part-Persian kitty weaves through the puzzle debris checking out ornate cups of Grogg. Curious of these human companions sitting at her table, daring to move the “chess” pieces in various shapes. She could use them for better than time-waste, could nibble like a tea biscuit. She’ll not let down her defenses. They must think she is an ordinary house cat. She won’t even “meow,” lest they reach out to attack her fur with long stroke rubs. But that kid! She can’t escape the one who puts her to chase as if she is the mouse, fallen into his trap. Still, she gets her exercise hopping over “hot coals,” again that mystic maze puzzle, through the legs of the giant chairs, “leaping-lizards” downstairs, on the run, not on the prowl til she exhausts the kid. The kid is her undoing. Now he is two-fisting a ball, in the air. She dare not stare. He will begin his bull-run again. Kitty hides in the shadows, but darn, she hears the pitter-patter of food into her bowl and she’s thirsty, too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/28/2023 4:42:00 PM
I like the way you took the cat's perspective, Kim. It made the poem very entertaining and fun to read. Have a great 2024! my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2023 9:02:00 PM
Thank ou, Bill! :)
Date: 12/28/2023 1:51:00 PM
Blessings to you as well. Happy New Year!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2023 9:02:00 PM
Happy New year!
Date: 12/27/2023 7:57:00 PM
Interesting, reminds me of my sister's cat, lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2023 6:25:00 AM
They are fun to watch!
Date: 12/27/2023 7:51:00 PM
Even kitties get their comeuppance occasionally. Interesting adventure. ~ Felix Cat Burglar
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2023 6:26:00 AM
Yes, they do! LOL
Date: 12/27/2023 3:18:00 PM
I cam imagine seeing this. I have 2 smart cats. Entertaining. One is a wild Bengal mix, going on 22 years old! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2023 6:59:00 PM
Wow! Super!
Date: 12/27/2023 6:59:00 AM
Poor little kitty can’t escape the kiddy. This is filled with fun images. Well done. Blessings Richard.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2023 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Richard! Blessings to you!
Date: 12/26/2023 4:29:00 PM
cats are clever...they're amazing to watch. They definitely don't like a child pulling on their tails. Your poem was creative and captivating. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2023 6:52:00 PM
Thank, Sara!
Date: 12/26/2023 3:22:00 PM
This reminds me of my youngest daughter. She would not leave the cat's tail alone. I kept telling her not to pull the cat's tail but she wouldn't listen and would pick the cat up by her tail. Until finally one day she picked the cat up by her tail and I picked her up by her pony tails. She never picked the cat up like that again. Love the story. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2023 6:52:00 PM
LOL! I guess she figured out that hurt!
Date: 12/26/2023 8:27:00 AM
Very creative and interesting insight into the mind and someone manipulations of cat.. clever creatures and great pets.. so much brighter than most animals.. nice poem Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2023 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 12/26/2023 8:19:00 AM
Kim, Your poem is a delightful journey into a world where the ordinary becomes extraordinary, and the mundane is transformed into a mystic adventure. Your poetic prowess shines through, and I thoroughly enjoyed the imaginative narrative you crafted. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. - Blessings, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2023 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel!
Date: 12/26/2023 7:40:00 AM
Oh my, this is such a creative write dear Kim! How you've described the thoughts of that kitty whilst keeping the readers captivated throughout your storytelling skills.. That kid looks lil mischievous who gives kitty her daily exercise haha..made me laugh so much lol.. And that bull-run too, amazingly crafted.. That was so hilariously written.. Enjoyed reading this 'mystic maze'.. Sending light to you :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Sharma!

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