THE MYSTIC MAZE

The part-Persian kitty weaves through the puzzle debris
checking out ornate cups
of Grogg. Curious of
these human companions sitting at her table,
daring to move the “chess” pieces
in various shapes. She could use them for better
than time-waste, could nibble
like a tea biscuit.
She’ll not let down her defenses. They must think
she is an ordinary house cat.
She won’t even “meow,” lest they
reach out to attack her fur with long stroke rubs.
But that kid! She can’t escape
the one who puts her to chase
as if she is the mouse, fallen into his trap.
Still, she gets her exercise
hopping over “hot coals,”
again that mystic maze puzzle,
through the legs
of the giant chairs,
“leaping-lizards” downstairs,
on the run, not
on the prowl
til she exhausts the kid.
The kid is her undoing.
Now he is two-fisting a ball,
in the air. She dare
not stare. He will
begin his bull-run again.
Kitty hides in the shadows, but darn,
she hears the pitter-patter of food into her bowl
and she’s thirsty, too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 4:42 PM
I like the way you took the cat's perspective, Kim. It made the poem very entertaining and fun to read. Have a great 2024! my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 9:02 PM
Thank ou, Bill! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Blessings to you as well. Happy New Year!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 9:02 PM
Happy New year!
Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Interesting, reminds me of my sister's cat, lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 6:25 AM
They are fun to watch!
Wolf Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Even kitties get their comeuppance occasionally. Interesting adventure. ~ Felix Cat Burglar
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Yes, they do! LOL
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:18 PM
I cam imagine seeing this. I have 2 smart cats. Entertaining. One is a wild Bengal mix, going on 22 years old! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 6:59 PM
Wow! Super!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Poor little kitty can’t escape the kiddy. This is filled with fun images. Well done. Blessings Richard.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thank you, Richard! Blessings to you!
Ball Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 3:22 PM
This reminds me of my youngest daughter. She would not leave the cat's tail alone. I kept telling her not to pull the cat's tail but she wouldn't listen and would pick the cat up by her tail. Until finally one day she picked the cat up by her tail and I picked her up by her pony tails. She never picked the cat up like that again. Love the story. Good job. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:52 PM
LOL! I guess she figured out that hurt!
One Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Very creative and interesting insight into the mind and someone manipulations of cat.. clever creatures and great pets.. so much brighter than most animals.. nice poem Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Rodgers Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Kim, Your poem is a delightful journey into a world where the ordinary becomes extraordinary, and the mundane is transformed into a mystic adventure. Your poetic prowess shines through, and I thoroughly enjoyed the imaginative narrative you crafted. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. - Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Daniel!
Sharma  Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Oh my, this is such a creative write dear Kim! How you've described the thoughts of that kitty whilst keeping the readers captivated throughout your storytelling skills.. That kid looks lil mischievous who gives kitty her daily exercise haha..made me laugh so much lol.. And that bull-run too, amazingly crafted.. That was so hilariously written.. Enjoyed reading this 'mystic maze'.. Sending light to you :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Thank you, Sharma!
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