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The Mystery of the Four Cactus

No one knows how this Desert became about The desert has cactus There are two rolls of them One row is separated by a road On the other side Another row spread In the evening the cactus Light up the cactus bright Further in the desert Are cactus curved Like a waterfall Only in the eve During the day the The hunched cactus Yet remain in their shape All this happened in the strange desert

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Date: 1/12/2024 12:05:00 PM
Thanks for this... I fell in love with these rolli-polli cacti-cuses your desert bore, surprised as we are.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2024 10:10:00 AM
Hello Daniel, I love the cactuses. I know that some have flowers. I like the ones that roll. I am glad I surprised you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/6/2023 11:25:00 AM
I am sure the desert has many secrets and many types of cactus. I would be to chicken to walk in it as am sure would step on a snake. Interesting poem not any desert here in Canada but some of our province looks like it in dry season. love phyl
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2023 11:17:00 AM
Hello Phyllis, I would not like to walk through a dessert and step on a snake. I also think that a dessert has many secrets. Yes some of our some of our provinces do look like desserts from the heat. Love,\ Darlene/
Date: 9/27/2023 9:23:00 PM
Hi Darlene… your poem brought back memories of my trip to Arizona. It was the first time I ever saw a cactus and thet come in many types in Arizona. Also, many snakes. I took a tour of the desert and I really liked it. It’s so hot in Arizona.. not a place for me to live. Visiting is fine. Pangie x
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2023 12:08:00 PM
Hello Paginagiota, yes I have seem the photos of the cacti. I was not aware there were so many of them. Do they all bold water? Hugs. xxx Darlene.xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/28/2023 10:54:00 AM
I sent you mail about the many cacti, plural for cactus.enjoy, I answered your questions in mail. Arizona is wonderful.In February that year, temps got up in the 80’s. But I really enjoyed winning that trip. I loved white water rafting, even though I was scared to death.)) Pangie
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2023 4:27:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Oh! I am glad that my poem brought you memories. Oh this is wonderful that you were able to see a desert with may types of cactus. What season did you go to see the Arizon desert? Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx
Date: 9/27/2023 1:24:00 PM
Cactus speaks with its own language. The mystery is in the desert... hi hi Take care always Miss Darlene! :) Cliff
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2023 4:15:00 PM
Hello Clifford, The cactus speaks!? They speak to each other? The dessert is a mystery. Good to see you. Mr. Clifford. Hi! Hi! Enjoy upir evening my friend. /Darlene\
Date: 9/25/2023 7:01:00 PM
Great description! I have spent many hours walking the high deserts of Arizona, entranced by countless wonders. Nothing like the desert in bloom -- cactus have gorgeous blossoms -- enchanting!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2023 10:06:00 AM
Hello Joe Di Mino, Oh the desert sounds lovely the way you described it. I did not know that cactus bloomed. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Date: 9/25/2023 3:58:00 PM
Thank you for the lesson about desert, I know that so many things took place down there, yet we won’t be able to fathom all it’s mysterious secrets, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2023 4:24:00 PM
Hello Sotto, Your welcome. There will always be a mystery about the desert. We will never see them the desert has many secrets. My friend enjoy your evening . /Darlene\
Date: 9/25/2023 3:40:00 PM
This poem certainly took me there. I enjoyed it. A Fave for me . Thanks for sharing. I hope you have a nice evening. :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2023 4:21:00 PM
Hello Heidi,Oh this is wonderful. Thank you for the fav. Thank you. I hope you have a nice evening to. Hugs. /Darlene\
Date: 9/25/2023 9:35:00 AM
The desert has many secrets. Because most of us only see the surface. We may never see one of its best kept secrets, its beauty.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2023 11:03:00 AM
Hello Jerry. Oh , I am sure the desert has many secrets. We will never see the secrets and beauties. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\Good to see you Jerry.
Date: 9/25/2023 6:12:00 AM
Nice to know my friend - the desert is mysterious, how some plants survive in that extreme heat, they rarely see rain so their roots must go very, very hope I should imagine - Hope you are doing well Darlene. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2023 11:01:00 AM
Hello Jennifer ,my friend. Yes the desert is mysterious. I am surprised that plants So good to see you. do grow there. So good to see you. thanks for dripping by. Blessings my friend. Darlene\
Date: 9/24/2023 12:20:00 PM
So much happens there that we do not know about.. thank you for the lesson.. have a lovely Sunday.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2023 4:15:00 AM
Hello Silent One, Yes so much happens in the desert we do not know about. The desert is a is a mystery after all. So good to see you Silent One. Your friend \Darlene/

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