The Mystery of the Bells


In an old Victorian building live two cats and a lady,
The girl cat is Patches and the boy cat is called Peanut;
And the lady is called mother, they all live in harmony.
One day, mother decided the cats needed to have collars,
So, she bought a pink one for Patches and a blue one for Peanut;
Each collar had a little bell that tinkled and tinkled as the cats walked.

Now, Patches loved her collar but Peanut twisted about,
He flopped on his back, putting his paws inside the blue collar; 
Finally, the bell fell off and he pounced after it across the room.
As Patches walked around her little bell went tinkle, tinkle, tinkle,
Peanut was determined to get that bell and became quite the pest;
Mother talked to Peanut telling him to STOP and leave the bell alone.

When mother came home from work the cats came,
She reached to stroke Patches and noticed the pink collar;
The bell was MISSING, she looked at Peanut, bad cat she said.
Where the bells went is still a MYSTERY that will stay unsolved,
Patches always wore her pink collar, she really loved to show it off;
Peanut totalled destroyed his within days and was very proud of that.

Mother pulled out furniture to look for those bells,
She looked in every corner, in every cupboard and drawer;
The bells were too big to eat, where did Peanut put those bells.
Well in time Peanut, although young went to heaven, God decides,
Patches followed not long after and mother was left so heartbroken;
One night, she was awoken to the sound of two tinkling, tinkling bells.

And still years after . . . she often hears those mysterious tinkling bells. 

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October 27, 2012

Poetry/Narrative/The Mystery Of The Bells
Copyright Protected, ID 10-431-323-27
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

In Memory of Peanut the Cat and Patches the Cat
(and the bells have never been found)

Submitted to the Standard contest, Mystery
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judged 11/2012

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Inman Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 11:16 PM
A wonderful ghostly tale BW.
Canerdy Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Good story, Constance! Congrats on your win! Janice
Kimathi Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Congrats BW, for your placement with this deep, captivating piece!! ;-)
Negron Flores Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the Mystery contest.
Y. Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Hi BW, You penned such a heartwarming mysterious write. This was a beautiful story. Congrats on your win it was well deserved. A gigantic seven. :-) Alexis P.S, You took down memory lane with this write. I thought about precious cat Cassie. I miss her so much.
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November 21, 2012 at 9:13 PM
Constance,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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October 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem, greatly appreciated. Love Constance
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October 27, 2012 at 9:30 PM
Constance, always loving your work...pd
Grisetti Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Cats are fun and mischieveous creatures. A joyful story to read.
Sivey Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:56 PM
This is quite the wondrous narrative my friend! I really enjoyed reading this very beautiful and enlightening poem this evening! What a wonderful and incredible piece, Great Work!!
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October 27, 2012 at 5:07 PM
* Ahhh, Sooo Sweet Yet Sad, Sweet Beautiful Constance, That Peanut Passed Unto Kitty Heaven. Made Me Remember The Story Of An Angel Whom Had The Most Enchanting And Beautiful Of Voices Far Beyound The Stars. Makes One's Heart A Tad Bit Sad. I Enjoyed Your Wonderful Well Written Verse And I Do Love The Colour 'Pink' As Pretty Little Meows Like 'Patches.' Love Always, Rachel *
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