The Mystery of Mind

Hidden in my mind
  deeper than depth of ocean
    down to the pit of abyss
Secret of a kind
  how universe in motion
    churns up the heavenly bliss!


~1/14/16
~Something Different-Sedoka contest by Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 28, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Abdul, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA --
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 4:02 PM
oooh, I really like this one. Congrats in the contest.
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:40 AM
ABDUL, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
Scars Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Abdul, thank you for being a part of my contest! :) *smiles* Congrats on your placement -luloo
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 11:15 AM
ohh, a cosmic delight, abdul... enjoyed this one.. huggs
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