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The Mystery of Humpty Dumpty

Humpty Dumpty never sat on the wall This was how he fooled us all He wore a large egg suit, begging for money Portraying that he was sweet as honey He put on an entertaining show Until faking his demising blow He did not know his shell would crack And break his skull during the act His plan backfired and, in the end, Humpty Dumpty will never live again 6/24/18

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Date: 7/8/2018 10:08:00 PM
Tania,a great painting of Humpty Dumpty. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/9/2018 4:47:00 AM
thank you
Date: 7/8/2018 8:46:00 AM
Lolol! Congratulations on your win. That is a twist in the story! Well said. Creative. Lol.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/8/2018 10:50:00 AM
thank you Susan!
Date: 7/7/2018 8:44:00 AM
Oh, I see, he was a begger, portraying as a egg he would beg for money, it was a really enjoyable poem, many congratulations on your win in the contest
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2018 9:58:00 AM
thank you, it was a fun contest!
Date: 6/25/2018 11:17:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha a belly laugh....very very impressive. God bless Tania. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2018 3:23:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/25/2018 7:14:00 AM
Tania, I love your creative plot.. super write!!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2018 10:06:00 AM
thank you, it was a fun one.
Date: 6/24/2018 8:11:00 PM
Very clever and funny! Good luck in the contest. Pandita
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 8:19:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/24/2018 4:15:00 PM
ha ha what a wonderful take on the contest. I've written my poem will post it tomorrow as I try and only post one poem a day:-) hugs Jan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 4:16:00 PM
thank you and good luck in the contest too!
Date: 6/24/2018 2:43:00 PM
Wow, Tania. A beautiful and comical write. Witty and awesome.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 3:33:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 6/24/2018 8:44:00 AM
Love it, Tania. Always good to have a fresh slant on an old rhyme. // Barry.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 9:58:00 AM
thank you

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