Tania Kitchin Poet Rhyme

The Mystery of Humpty Dumpty

Humpty Dumpty never sat on the wall
This was how he fooled us all
He wore a large egg suit, begging for money
Portraying that he was sweet as honey
He put on an entertaining show
Until faking his demising blow
He did not know his shell would crack
And break his skull during the act
His plan backfired and, in the end,
Humpty Dumpty will never live again 



6/24/18

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Eve Roper July 8, 2018 at 10:08 PM Tania,a great painting of Humpty Dumpty. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve Tania Kitchin July 9, 2018 at 4:47 AM thank you

Susan Gentry July 8, 2018 at 8:46 AM Lolol! Congratulations on your win. That is a twist in the story! Well said. Creative. Lol. Tania Kitchin July 8, 2018 at 10:50 AM thank you Susan!

Faraz Ajmal July 7, 2018 at 8:44 AM Oh, I see, he was a begger, portraying as a egg he would beg for money, it was a really enjoyable poem, many congratulations on your win in the contest Tania Kitchin July 7, 2018 at 9:58 AM thank you, it was a fun contest!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty June 25, 2018 at 11:17 AM Ha Ha Ha a belly laugh....very very impressive. God bless Tania. Hugs. Tania Kitchin June 25, 2018 at 3:23 PM thank you

Lyric Man June 25, 2018 at 7:14 AM Tania, I love your creative plot.. super write!! Tania Kitchin June 25, 2018 at 10:06 AM thank you, it was a fun one.

Pandita Sietesantos June 24, 2018 at 8:11 PM Very clever and funny! Good luck in the contest. Pandita Tania Kitchin June 24, 2018 at 8:19 PM thank you

Jan Allison June 24, 2018 at 4:15 PM ha ha what a wonderful take on the contest. I've written my poem will post it tomorrow as I try and only post one poem a day:-) hugs Jan Tania Kitchin June 24, 2018 at 4:16 PM thank you and good luck in the contest too!

Line Gauthier June 24, 2018 at 2:43 PM Wow, Tania. A beautiful and comical write. Witty and awesome. Tania Kitchin June 24, 2018 at 3:33 PM thank you!

Barry Stebbings June 24, 2018 at 8:44 AM Love it, Tania. Always good to have a fresh slant on an old rhyme. // Barry. Tania Kitchin June 24, 2018 at 9:58 AM thank you