The Mystery

As my heart groaned
In real deep pain
The blood oozed out
And my cry was in vain

No one near
To care for me
As I looked around
And searched for peace

All alone I wandered
Hoping to come across an oasis
But I saw no water
Just heard the wind's hiss

As I walked with my burdened legs
I found it hard to walk in the desert
I was in the middle of a huge dry land
I couldnt even think to revert

The Sun was bright and shining golden yellow
Making me feel hotter than it really is
As sweat poured down my tired eye brows
I prayed to sky for a cool blowing breeze

Far away, about miles distant
I saw something calling, shining and bright
My eyes felt much better
And the load of my heart suddenly felt light 

As I lifted my legs faster
And made an attempt to reach the treasure
The wind hugged me in its huge arms
And I felt a divine pleasure

I hurried myself to unveil the mystery
I was so eager and so much anxious
I was unaware of my own condition
Unaware of my own conscious

I took up the discovery in my hands
Blew the dust away and removed the sands

It was in fact, a twig with three golden leaves
I tried to observe them and found great relief
One was Confidence, One named Hope
And the third one was my Hearts Belief

I looked up and asked my god
Do you have any explanation for this?
To which He just smiled back 
And gave me His loving caressing kiss

Now I know what he means
He has given me the best he can
As I turn around and take a look
I am in an oasis and the happiest man!
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:19:00 PM
Nice ending... Welcome to poetry soup..
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Prasanna Koppar
Date: 6/1/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so much once again :) Really honoured to receive such comments from you
Date: 5/24/2020 12:43:00 PM
Hello Prasanna Koppar, so nice to meet you. Oh this poem is awsome! I felt like i was travelling somewhere. God is with us always every day. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2020 5:44:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/25/2020 6:57:00 PM
Hello Prasanna Kopper, I also pray to God to keep everyone safe.and healthy.You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening .
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Prasanna Koppar
Date: 5/24/2020 1:26:00 PM
Hello Darlene De Beaulieu, nice to meet you too. Thank you so very much for your comments. Makes me feel very good :) . Yea. I pray to God to keep everyone healthy and safe. Thank you once again. You too have a good day :)
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