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The Mysterious Girl

THE MYSTERIOUS GIRL By Radebe Diemo Glen Hopeless, yet heartbroken, that’s when I saw her. A girl so beautiful, so innocent – she blew my mind away, Took my heart by storm And left it wondering. A sharp pang shut through my body And made my left leg go numb. She said one word… It flattered me with its beauty. I may forget what she said, But I would still feel so bad. I will, however, not forget how she makes me feel. I just hope she and I have a deal. My love for her has no magnitudes. It drives me crazy; I’d reach all altitudes. I hate being an abductee, Rather I will make her my honouree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/14/2019 7:02:00 PM
I'm not qualified to "critique," but I hope you will keep writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/14/2019 4:43:00 AM
Your support and comments will be highly appreciated. Please do let me know what you think - More is still yet to come.
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