Diemo Glen Radebe Poet Monorhyme

The Mysterious Girl

THE MYSTERIOUS GIRL 
By Radebe Diemo Glen 
 
Hopeless, yet heartbroken, that’s when I saw her. 
A girl so beautiful, so innocent – she blew my mind away, 
Took my heart by storm 
And left it wondering. 
 
A sharp pang shut through my body 
And made my left leg go numb. 
She said one word… 
It flattered me with its beauty. 
 
I may forget what she said, 
But I would still feel so bad. 
I will, however, not forget how she makes me feel. 
I just hope she and I have a deal. 
 
My love for her has no magnitudes. 
It drives me crazy; I’d reach all altitudes. 
I hate being an abductee, 
Rather I will make her my honouree.

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Sunlite Wanter April 14, 2019 at 7:02 PM I'm not qualified to "critique," but I hope you will keep writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Diemo Glen Radebe April 14, 2019 at 4:43 AM Your support and comments will be highly appreciated. Please do let me know what you think - More is still yet to come.