The Mysterious Gift

She walked along the narrow path.
Along the side of the lonely stream.
Her golden hair was wet
and stuck haphazardly to her face.
That face that was so tanned
fruit of summer swimming
in the lake nearby.
Her hands were cupped,
one over the other.
It's a present for you, said she.
I wondered what she hid.
She smiled and pirouetted
lively on the wet, dewy grass.
She made as if to turn back, 
then stuck out her tongue.
Get your present, she taunted.
I was slightly irritated
but decided to comply.
Slowly, she pleaded
and opened her hand.
Out jumped a small green frog
and sprang into the stream.
She laughed, a melody of joy.
And I?  I felt I was 
In a whirlwind of mad emotions.
Was I like the frog?
Was I a prisoner of her love?
Only to escape when she let go?
How childish she was!
I looked deep in her green eyes,
So full of innocent joy.
I smiled, then kissed her deep;
Then, hand in hand
we turned back home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Roper Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 8:09 PM
wonderful romantic capricious scene with great imagery. enjoyed reading my friend.
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:45 PM
aww what a cute poem Victor, your tales are always so wonderfully descriptive! hugs jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Interesting. Good poem that reminds me of the fairytale, "the Frog Prince". Perhaps you got out of there just in time.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Oh what a deep write this is dear victor, this is one of those poems that just flow so seamlessly and was easy to read and grasp. And i saw through your vivid imagery. So descriptive and captivating! What especially hits strongly for me is “ Was I like the frog? Was I a prisoner of her love? Only to escape when she let go?” so soulful! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
Williams Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 5:34 AM
She sounds like she has managed to keep the inner child within, a beautiful way to be. Beautifully written my dear friend Victor, and I agree with Rose, Hallmark would love your poems. Love and hugs
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:59 AM
You should be writing for Hallmark dear Victor, your words are captivating. Love this , a fav
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:43 PM
So sweet in a memorable moment! Hugs ~ Kim
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 3:39 PM
hmmm, I thought maybe these were little kids but at the end, I don't think so. haha
Edmonds  Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Beautiful Victor, how sweet, to be young and playful is the loveliest time of one’s life, if one’s allowed to be that way, I wasn’t unfortunately… Beryl
Poet Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Wonderful poem, Victor captures a fleeting moment of youthful love and innocence, emphasizing the joy and innocence of a shared experience between two young individuals. It reflects on the complexities of love and the feelings of freedom and entrapment that can accompany it.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 10:19 AM
The wonder of the unexpected and unpredictable! The beauty of spontaneity.. the tolerance and joy of lovers.. the innocence of moments in time! You always carry your avid reader to new feels and thoughts and setting! It is a deep pleasure to read you dear Victor.. What you write of poetry is of great worth! Hope you are doing great.. God bless you. My deepest regards.
May Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:09 AM
A nice ending to this lovely verse, Very nicely done
Tor Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Such a lovely ending Victor. Great story line. I felt your emotions through it all and in the end you got the prize...
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 3:27 AM
Ahh!! How romantic except for the frog. LOL..I would not want the frog in the scene. LOL..Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Sharma  Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 12:42 AM
Woah, this piece indeed feels like a rollercoaster of emotions and conveys so much more than what just meets the eye! Your poetic skills are top notch here and I also love how you've carved those emerald descriptions of her essence with " looked deep in her green eyes", "Out jumped a small green frog" So impeccably crafted with depth and an intriguing ambience of a passionate saga ~
Buehler Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 10:17 PM
A pleasantly romantic story of delightful images, playfulness, and a very satisfying, happy ending. Much enjoyed, my friend. :)
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