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Of restless moonless blue sky, no stars sway. Through unfailing half-deserted winding cobblestone lanes, wall sconces light the way. Castle stone walls forged, dead ends are binding. The muttering retreats through half-deserted streets, shattered recall repeats. Forbid to know; those come and go; but, hush, it's so. A whisper rambling brings a dreadful day. Insidious sleep a chance of finding. Fragile trouble soul disastrous defeats which still doth grow. 5/27/2018 Poetry Contest: The Puzzle Of My Rhyme Sponsored By: Broken Wings 1. The muttering retreats 1. dreadful 2. blue 3. fragile 4. shattered 5. whisper

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Date: 6/25/2018 6:22:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! Well done :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 3:16:00 PM
YOu did an amazing job with the theme and words, Eve. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/24/2018 7:09:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write, well done ~
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful execution, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/27/2018 5:39:00 PM
This is deep and amazing write! Best of luck in contest. Should be a winner.
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Date: 5/27/2018 1:20:00 PM
"An incredible rhyme, Eve! Deep and profound.. Great imagery! Enjoyed reading.."
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:50:00 AM
Nicely done my friend...too complex for me...best of luck...love and light...^WW^
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