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The Muttering Retreats

Of restless moonless blue sky, no stars sway.
Through unfailing half-deserted winding
cobblestone lanes, wall sconces light the way.
     Castle stone walls forged, dead ends are binding.
     The muttering retreats
     through half-deserted streets,
     shattered recall repeats.
                           Forbid to know;
        those come and go;
          but, hush, it's so.
A whisper rambling brings a dreadful day.
Insidious sleep a chance of finding.
Fragile trouble soul disastrous defeats
                           which still doth grow.


5/27/2018

Poetry Contest: The Puzzle Of My Rhyme  
Sponsored By: Broken Wings 

 1.    The muttering retreats  
 1. dreadful    2.   blue    3.  fragile 4.  shattered 5.  whisper
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Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! Well done :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 3:16 PM
YOu did an amazing job with the theme and words, Eve. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write, well done ~
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Beautiful execution, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Gentry Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 5:39 PM
This is deep and amazing write! Best of luck in contest. Should be a winner.
B. Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 1:20 PM
"An incredible rhyme, Eve! Deep and profound.. Great imagery! Enjoyed reading.."
Warrior Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Nicely done my friend...too complex for me...best of luck...love and light...^WW^
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