Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

The Mustang and the Thunderbird

A Mustang and a Thunderbird tangled

   Both automobiles were badly mangled

      When the cops sorted it out

         There was seen strewn all about

            Horse manure and feathers when untangled

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 1 in PD's "Another Crazy & Fun Limerick Contest #2" - June 2012

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David Williams June 13, 2012 at 7:26 AM Bob, congrats on your win..very funny..David

Kim Merryman June 12, 2012 at 8:13 PM Very clever limerick, Bob. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Sandra Hoban June 12, 2012 at 2:32 PM Great read, congratulations Bob

Jonas L. Rozario June 12, 2012 at 7:23 AM So no Camaro was involved!?!? kiddin'...a great limerick Bob...enjoyed it a lot & congrats on your awesome win.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 12, 2012 at 7:18 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 12, 2012 at 1:12 AM Congratulations Bob smashing xx

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 12, 2012 at 12:31 AM Bob, Congrats on your top win, :) Jag

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2012 at 9:34 PM YOurs had a marvelous humor. Big congrats!!

Ilene Bauer June 11, 2012 at 7:54 PM hey bob! congratulations on your big win! i knew this poem would do well in the contest.

Ralph Taylor June 11, 2012 at 6:29 PM Congrats, Sarge. Well deserved 1st place. LOL. Enjoyed. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Una hanging in, holding her own. Best to you and Vera. God bless. Una/Ralphie

Joann Grisetti June 11, 2012 at 5:58 PM Congratulations on your winning limerick.

Terry O'Leary June 11, 2012 at 5:24 PM Very funny... Congrats... Terry

Gwendolen Song June 11, 2012 at 1:51 PM Knee slapper here, Bob! Congrats for writing a super fun comedic scene! :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2012 at 12:38 PM Bob H., , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK,,, XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2012 at 8:28 PM yes, I got that right as I finished writing my first comment below, Robert. That was very clever!!

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2012 at 7:58 PM hahah, what the heck? Did they crash into a barn?

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2012 at 7:58 PM oh good grief, you were personifying the cars. OK NOW I get it.

Peggy Caulfield June 6, 2012 at 4:42 PM That was quite a messy poem. It probably is a smelly poem too, but quite interesting.

Ilene Bauer June 6, 2012 at 4:22 PM ha! as silly as this is, i'm still trying to picture it and that makes it even sillier! thanks for the laugh!

Lucilla Carrillo June 6, 2012 at 3:44 PM Robert; this is funny, I enjoyed it. In 1972, I had a 1972 Thunderbird. That was the most expensive car I ever had. I checked on the poems that you told me and did not find them. Maybe you forgot to post them. Lucilla

Russell Sivey June 6, 2012 at 2:43 PM Awesome, simply and awesome write my friend! I love the subtle humor you have displayed! Fantastic write, Great Work!!

Kathryn Collins June 6, 2012 at 1:09 PM It took me a minute Bob. Unbelievably clever and funny.