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The Musk of the Rose


Leaves fell,
wind blew,
dark winter's night,
the fragile air
saturated with dew.
She knew
a certainty that bound
a knot in her stomach.
He won't come tonight.
Was it worth the wait,
wailing for her lover
like a boat ready for sailing
only to find a stormy sea?
Had she not closed all doors?
Closed louvers and secured
every blessed window
of her lonely soul?
Now she could but dream
of him she scared away, 
Now her garden was empty,
the musk of the rose gone forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Lovely and emotive Victor. Very nicely written. Linda
Jayasankar Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 2:41 AM
A sad and emotional poem Victor,... 'like a boat ready for sailing, only to find stormy sea'... loved it. God bless.. ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 4:45 AM
You have a way of drawing deep emotion! God bless you, sweet friend!
Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 1:18 AM
Love sad poetry, Victor, it is real part of our lives, reading it, helps a lot..This is wonderful my friend.
Y. Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 11:48 PM
Hi Victor, You have penned such a well-written yet sad write. At least she has the memories of her lovely garden. Well done, my friend:-)Alexis
Milgate Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Always something fine to read, wonder why we make life so hard on ourselves. good poem. Is it fear I wonder.
Ball Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 9:00 PM
WoW! Beautifully written and so well expressed. There is a sadness here for some mistake that caused her lover to leave. Hopefully he will return and give her one more chance. God Bless,\ JB
Tor Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Heartfelt piece Victor. I sense heartache in this one. Your ability to consistently write marvelous creations, amazes me Victor. As Rush Limbaugh use to say," Talent from God".
Edmonds  Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:32 PM
At least her dreams keep her love alive, even those she’s closed all doors to her heart soul and mind ~~ Belle
Buehler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 11:17 AM
So sad and lovey! A haunting poem. :)
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 5:54 AM
Hearts of lovers--so complex! Much sadness in empty garden.
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 4:34 AM
- A sad poem ... beautifully written, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:45 AM
Fate took a hand and it wasn't to be. Tom
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