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Edna Morris lived in the town of Shadow Fells, in rich green, hilly country, With doting parents and sister Violet, plucking fruit from their plum tree. Pretty Edna was twelve years old, but she and Violet played all seasons, Making skinny scarecrows and fat snowmen, like blizzards of no reason. Horses were a common sight in the area, like the pastel beauty of dawn. The Morrises had yet to aquire one, like black velvet, once moon is gone. Flexible friends frolicked with Violet and Edna, like thrills of the first fall; And they forever frisked and flitted, like fall's harmonized, colorful brawl. Fickle frost didn't deter family, who bore fruit cakes and Christmas cheer; And delicious fudge and fond memories, in the final moments of the year. Edna lived in the house of pretty music, of tireless redbird song, each day; And raspy croaking and invisible crickets, wiling rare, golden hours away. Sleek ravens roamed skies, richly blue, alighting and cawing in cypresses, On shady, emerald, Raspberry Road, where ladies strolled, in silk dresses. Nobody did nicer knitting than Norma, next door neighbor of their hearts, Who gave neat gifts on novel birthdays, like spring, ruing ever being apart. Edna and Violet loved sledding in winter, so fit for the area's many slopes. Their dream was to own a red sleigh. Yet poverty can destroy many hopes! Parachute blooms bailed out, while the 'scale trees' were up to things fishy; And 'water caltrops' acted nutty, as 'dancing plants' waltzed to sun, cheery. Purple 'Victoria lilies' lauded triumph, near 'golf ball' plants, on the green; As 'jellyfish trees' stayed rooted in reality, with red butterflies on the scene. Summer's raucous party was long over, crowded out by pretty colors of fall, Whose own footsteps were soon dogged by winter, like rainbows of recall. Though joyful Christmas was nearing, Violet and Edna asked for sleds, only, Because a sleigh was forever out of reach; like stars, when moon is lonely. And anyhow, blue world kept turning as ever, 'round saffron sun, its usher; Until blest Christmas Eve had arrived, just when all with snow, was covered. Violet and Edna were having fun with snowballs, as jolly music was heard; At first very faint, but pulsing louder, like the newly risen, pink dawn birds. Or like the gladness of the sweetest season, steadily growing more intense; As the red sunset world dreams again, of peace and love, in joyful suspense. Suddenly, a red, surprise sleigh appeared, with its horse, driven by Father, With many bells around its neck, ringing. The girls shrieked and hollered! Father said that he'd bought it all from a neighbor, with no further use of it; And he'd painted the sleigh red himself, like colorful fall, vanishing for a bit. 'Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way, Oh what fun it is to ride In a one-horse open sleigh, O Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way, Oh what fun it is to ride In a one-horse open sleigh.'

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Date: 12/18/2024 1:01:00 PM
a sweet little story of winter fun, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/18/2024 1:05:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, dear Andrea. :)
Date: 12/16/2024 4:07:00 PM
so touching poem, evelyn, remarkable and so inspiring, enjoyed a lot
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2024 9:09:00 PM
Thank you for your precious comment, Yann. :)
Date: 12/14/2024 8:10:00 PM
I'd forgotten how rich and remarkable your imagination is, Evelyn, as I've been too long away from your site. And I think it's growing ever richer with the passage of time as well. Hurrah for this one! Thanks, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful compliments, Gershon. I'm happy to know you enjoyed my tale. Warmest wishes, my friend. Evelyn
Date: 12/14/2024 4:27:00 AM
- Wonderfully written, Evelyn - You really are in the Christmas spirit :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thank you for saying so, Gershon. ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/14/2024 8:10:00 PM
Evelyn may jest BE the Christmas Spirit personified! Bravo, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2024 6:44:00 PM
Deepest thanks, Anne-Lise. Very best wishes, hugs Evelyn :)
Date: 12/13/2024 10:59:00 PM
What a lovely story Evelyn even poor people can overcome and make their Christmas Joyful and fun. Such a lovely theme by you with great characters the reader grow fond of. Another of your wonderful creative writes that brings joy to the heart when reading. God bless you for sharing...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2024 6:42:00 PM
Dear Michael, thank you for your valuable comment. It was a pleasure to read it. I'm so glad you enjoyed my tale. Wishing you all the joys of the season, Evelyn
Date: 12/13/2024 10:33:00 PM
How delightful, dear Evelyn, to see you get your heart's desire. Let's jingle all the way. Brilliant.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/13/2024 10:59:00 PM
Thak you for your kind appreciation, my friend. It was a joy to read your comment. :)

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