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The Music She Hears

She sits on the bench Her life in three plastic bags Singing to herself Her mind dancing all about To music only she hears

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/18/2015 5:48:00 PM

Excellent pen Barbara!I really enjoyed reading your very nice Tanka here.A 7! And thank you so much for visiting my page:)Very much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!n his light God bless you!:) D

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2015 12:13:00 AM

I think we've all seen this woman, she is, sadly, in most cities. It is a very good poem and because of how it hits me, it is also very emotional and sad. Very good poetry, Barbara ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2015 7:14:00 PM

beautiful yet so sad Barbara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2015 6:32:00 PM

I love this tanka, Barbara a 7.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2015 6:08:00 PM

I really like this. Tanka works so well for it.