The Music of Waves

Beneath the blue sky Sailing tropical currents, Basking in the sun. * Basking in the sun, On the surface of beauty, The ocean bestows. * The ocean bestows The most beautiful soundscape, The music of waves.
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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:40 PM
Beautiful music it is, nice wya of expressing it lovely melodies.
Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Peaceful and serene the music of waves.
Davis Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:54 PM
Music of the water, great words.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 12:58 AM
Serene and peaceful... sounds and colours so beautifully delineated. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Strand Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Like the way these last two postings fit Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
De La Keur Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 10:56 PM
The ocean is so calming and I love to listen to the waves crash against the sand, I'll have to write about it now, lol, Love Aleera
Rhinem Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 9:48 PM
Smile~Yes, it surely my Brother!!!:):) I loved the softness of this gentle and serene write here Raul!!!:):) Plus, the layout was so fitting to the entire expreience and feeling!!!:):) Wonderful Job My Gifted Friend~My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Goodnight Brother:):)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 5:21 PM
Marvelous flow and imagery! Well done Raul!! Best wishes, Keith
Wilson Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 4:03 PM
Raul another stunning poem I'd love to be there basking in the sun listening to the waves drinking my Pina Colada.Thank you for your comments on my poems. God Bless. Leon
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April 6, 2009 at 3:05 PM
You are on quite the creative roll lately. You can send a little of that inspiration my way. Beautiful imagery! Sounds like a wonderful place to be. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment on my haiku. Keep on writing!!!! Karen
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