The Music of Autumn

nature's gracious voice
whistles a benediction
over fallen leaves

fall's naked branches
shiver to the rhythmic beat
songbird's vibrato

winter takes the lead
the ballet of the snowflakes
begins production


written in honor of 9/22/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 6:12 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Reason. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 5:08 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Reason
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 11:58 PM
hmmm, this one is really good!! congrats for the winners' list.
A  Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:58 PM
nice win......skat
Brown Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Congrats on your win in Janette Fisher's sponsored contest Reason. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:34 PM
rich imagery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 4:57 PM
Lovely. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Reason, loving the melody and image, congratulations with your awesome win,, always~pd
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations Reason xx
Bauer Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 1:55 PM
this is just lovely!
Williams Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 10:18 AM
Reason good set of haiuk's, first one my fav. David
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