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The Music Box

The melodic tinkle of the music box moved her. She arose with her pretty tresses and floor length silk toward the shadows that possess treasures of death. Like a grandfather clock with metal prongs and teeth it plays a lovely song that draws the gothic lass into the abyss. Her temporal time harnessed by a young girl’s dreamy track, “dum, dum, dum, da, da, da, dum, dum…” In reminiscent fog of childhood, Cassandra moves with the innocence of a toddler, with the outward aplomb of a zombie. When, at last, she is in the spiderweb, her senses come around. She still can’t flee and the shadow becomes a man, a thing, unthinkable - she recognizes his hypnotic countenance, his eyes an unimaginable blue, his face paler than a ghostly child, his cape - a shroud about his shoulders. He hums, “dum, dum, dum, da, da, da, dum, dum…” A guttural scream, she recognizes vibrates from her own lips. The monster allows the chase and caterwaul within his space. Melancholy and madness, take hold, as her neck is bared and she becomes one of the undead. Only released from the melody’s hold, when she she sinks her teeth into an innocent victim, but alas, she also is reminded of her past life, so cold, she weeps. The progenitor laughs.

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Date: 10/15/2023 7:02:00 PM
Eegads. I'm scheduled to accompany Boris and Natasha to the cemetary at midnight. Think I should push that off a bit. lol. Grisly-good stuff, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2023 5:58:00 AM
LOL! Thanks. You want spooky…true tale - Senior year high school rode with friends into graveyard at midnight…it was only snowing in the graveyard. We were like..let’s get out of here…lol.
Date: 10/14/2023 7:11:00 PM
A creepy tale for the Halloween season, my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2023 8:23:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/14/2023 4:27:00 AM
A splendid tale that kept me glued to your page my friend. Both intriguing and spooky, jus as intended--aptly done for the season, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2023 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 10/14/2023 3:05:00 AM
Very spooky Kim! Eeks, really!! This is a good for this time of year!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2023 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, BJ!
Date: 10/14/2023 1:46:00 AM
the outward aplomb of a zombie: good thing I can distinguish fantasy from reality. I have written fantasy poems, so I know. Your poem is worthy of an elegant poet. Great tale. Hugs and blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2023 8:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor! Hugs and bless,
Date: 10/13/2023 3:34:00 PM
perfect for the Halloween season, your poem was creepy indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 10/13/2023 3:24:00 PM
An engaging Halloween tale, Kim. Well written and an intriguing read, my friend. Thanks for sharing your prose with us. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 5:05:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!

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