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The moon and venus with the sun rising. 

Genesis 1:16 Context 13And the evening and the morning were the third day. 14And God said, Let there be lights in the firmament of the heaven to divide the day from the night; and let them be for signs, and for seasons, and for days, and years: 15And let them be for lights in the firmament of the heaven to give light upon the earth: and it was so. 16And God made two great lights; the greater light to rule the day, and the lesser light to rule the night: he made the stars also. 17And God set them in the firmament of the heaven to give light upon the earth, 18And to rule over the day and over the night, and to divide the light from the darkness: and God saw that it was good. 19And the evening and the morning were the fourth day.
Out on the porch at faint light Cool air surrounds the poet It transports to a quieter time Don't you just know it
Silver sliver moon Nestles rough scars, dark side.... Star of the morning Surrounded by artic blue sky Brush stroked with streaks of light gray As doves softly sing their morning song A magenta sun warms. Tips of silhouetted forest pines Seen through spider web catching swarms The sunbeam light fills closer trees Its brighter light reduces Star of the morning to a dot. Clouds moving across confuses The beam of the sun reaches out Gives the writer improved light Reveals all her mistakes Clouds turning magenta delight What a way to start the morning Enjoying cool given God in His mercy grants this time These moments create a haven
I know this is a duke's mixture/probably plenty of grammatical mistakes, etc.

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Date: 8/4/2022 12:53:00 AM
That's a great write. Very nicely penned... Blessings ~Paghunda
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Date: 7/25/2022 2:48:00 PM
The scriptures and your poem were a perfect match my dear friend. Your offering today was a peaceful and colming welcome to my day. :-) Thank you, Sara. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2022 3:02:00 AM
Why, thank you, Bill. I enjoyed seeing the dawn turn into day. I felt that my writing was describing the scene unfolding before my eyes. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara
Date: 7/25/2022 8:51:00 AM
There is so much to be grateful for in this life Sara, it is indeed a beautiful world we live in. Hope you have a great week. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:24:00 PM
Why, thank you, Tom. Sometimes I forget to be thankful. I hope your week is awesome as well. Sara
Date: 7/25/2022 8:28:00 AM
Lovely write. I don't know why I never use scripture for my poems. Only a few. But my poems are always meant to be scripturally correct.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:20:00 PM
Victor, Thank you for dropping by. Sometimes a scripture just fits a poem, and I felt this one did. Thank you for dropping by. I am glad that you mean for your works to be scripturally correct. Sara
Date: 7/25/2022 7:16:00 AM
Wow, this is powerful writing and a great Haibun, Sara. Love it. Thanks for your comment on my page.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/25/2022 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Sotto. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

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