The Murmuration

l saw her by the edge of the burnt mossy wall
and she was watching high above,  over forests so tall
then as the dusk gathered starlings,  that danced in the melting sun
it was the breathless display,  and mesmerising begun

in the last Autumn rays,  that painted threads through the trees
like the strands in her hair that stroked again in the breeze
and their dance was perfection as she watched murmuration
and their velvet display was their beautiful creation

gently the stars said hello, as the white moon glimpsed below
and her slowly wrapped dreams,  she sent of her kisses he'd know
and they went drifting slow like the gossamer clouds
and her love for him soft, like the starling, a glow

still her eyes searched afar, over the bracken filled glens
as she looked for his face and his smile and his arms to embrace
and never gave up hope,  as she waited each night
and she watched starlings call , over mossy green wall 

the dance of the starlings is a sight to behold
like a true love is precious , more precious
than gold.

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Date: 7/11/2025 12:41:00 PM
Here are two I wrote: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/those_darling_starlings_1533822 and https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/murmuration_of_starlings_high_1490507 if you want to read. I was fascinated the first time I heard their racket and opened the door then looked up what they were
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/15/2025 7:23:00 AM
hi Kim, l cant get your links to work to find your mentioned poems, can you tell the no. of the page they are on. J.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/13/2025 1:25:00 AM
l will surely take a look at your poems listed Kim as soon as l can. im really not too well at moment in lots of pain so have not been able to read up on poetry last few days but just wanted to reply how kind you are for sharing your work as l love reading peoples poetry. J x
Date: 7/11/2025 7:28:00 AM
and their dance was perfection as she watched murmuration… still her eyes searched afar, over the bracken filled glens…sweet ending… Congrats!
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/11/2025 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Kim , l enjoyed writing this one as l learnt a lot when researching. The starlings murmuration's are spectacular and iv never seen one :( iv read they have declined by 80% in the last 5 yrs due to lost habitat :(
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