Get Your Premium Membership

The Murderer's Mind

Here we sit At a whistle stop, thinking Over our coffee cup. The steam curls up And begs for attention. But sitting, thinking, In animated suspension, We sit. We wait. Eager to get there. But where? So we sit. And we wait. Until perhaps, Just perhaps, Someone takes the bait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/3/2015 5:40:00 PM
The underlying meaning is kind of subtle despite the title. However, the way that you chop the lines into little pieces makes it a little bit more suspenseful and puts the reader into a specific mind frame and I really like it, man. It's great
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things