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The Mouse with the Hat

I once spied a bold mouse with the hat is there anything dafter than that at this sought after headgear they’ll chase on their crown crown it would seem out of place in some way it was strange at first sight as the mouse starts to nibble and bite it’s my hat not some cheese plate you twerp soon your tummy will ache and then burp dearest pet leave this item alone dash away or I’ll openly groan

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Date: 10/23/2024 7:40:00 PM
Simply for calling this mouse a twirp has earned you a win in my contest. Good job and congrts.
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Howard Kerr
Date: 10/23/2024 11:33:00 PM
Hi Miranda, I appreciate your comment, your placement and of course I equally value the time involved in reading my entry Howard
Date: 10/8/2024 4:25:00 AM
lol I chose the same prompt but a totally different idea lol, i wish I'd thought of putting cheese on my hat instead of fruit lol:-) hugs Jan
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