The Mouse with the Hat

I once spied a bold mouse with the hat 
is there anything dafter than that
at this sought after headgear they’ll chase
on their crown crown it would seem out of place
in some way it was strange at first sight 
as the mouse starts to nibble and bite 
it’s my hat not some cheese plate you twerp
soon your tummy will ache and then burp 
dearest pet leave this item alone 
dash away or I’ll openly groan
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Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 4:51 PM
Ahh a really cute one I found back here
Kerr Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Many thanks, Andrea, for that and all your other supportive comments Howard
Hawley Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 7:40 PM
Simply for calling this mouse a twirp has earned you a win in my contest. Good job and congrts.
Kerr Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Hi Miranda, I appreciate your comment, your placement and of course I equally value the time involved in reading my entry Howard
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 4:25 AM
lol I chose the same prompt but a totally different idea lol, i wish I'd thought of putting cheese on my hat instead of fruit lol:-) hugs Jan
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