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9/30/2024 for Just A Silly Little Poem 10 Lines or Less Poetry Contest sponsored by Miranda Hawley

A mouse with a hat? Think of that. Is it really so extraordinary on this wild and lonely prairie? I've seen little dogs that fly as I scratch my head to wonder why you left me with this zoo, with this animal's who's who, and a cold wind blowing brisky, whilst I drink my moonshine whiskey.

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Date: 10/23/2024 7:38:00 PM
Yep, this was a silly one alright. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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David Crandall
Date: 10/23/2024 7:46:00 PM
Thanks Miranda, haha, I like silly so I was glad to see this contest.
Date: 10/13/2024 3:15:00 PM
Me thinks a little more water with that moonshine, David. Enjoyed your amusing write… now pass that bottle over
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David Crandall
Date: 10/13/2024 6:42:00 PM
haha, thanks Terry!
Date: 10/13/2024 1:02:00 AM
lovely dear poet. congratulations on your win. happy writing.
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David Crandall
Date: 10/13/2024 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Thriveni!
Date: 10/1/2024 10:55:00 AM
SO awesomely silly. Love it.
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David Crandall
Date: 10/2/2024 9:07:00 AM
Why thanks Andrea! Glad you liked it.
Date: 9/30/2024 11:17:00 AM
I'll give a shot out for that. Nice rhyme.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/30/2024 9:51:00 PM
Thanks. I'll drink to that!

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