The Mouse

The mouse was swallowed by a grouse,
Hawk had the grouse for dinner.
One gunshot blast, the hawk was dead,
the mouse walked out the winner.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Chamberlain Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 5:43 AM
I really enjoyed your poem. It reminded me of a nursery rhyme I loved to sing as a child. 'There was an old lady that swallowed a fly'. Nicely done.
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Maybe the mouse ate the hawk for dinner. Cute one, Beverly! Cheers, Gershon
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