The Mountains of Colorado

A PLACE CALLED BEAUTIFUL CONTEST Sponsor: Janis Thompson Mountains of Colorado On a mount up above towards the peak of the pike, Sets the sun in the west way far up in the clear sky, The blue and pink mixed within each other alike, Snow-capped and white-laced wrapped lifted up high. As the mighty bald eagle soars beautifully overhead, His white head full of majesty with robust feathers, Brilliant orange talons watching as his prey all fled, I look all around me and see multi-colored Heather’s, Pikes Peak rises over fourteen thousand feet high, A rocky heap looking like it’s touching sweet heaven, As I watch in wonder a tender tear falls from my eye, The remarkable sights could become an obsession. Far in the distance lives the Garden of the God’s, Rusty-amber colored mountains full of wonder, The stature of these monuments may seem quite odd, Because tourists can walk through them and under. A famous attraction is known as the “Kissing Camels”, Two peaks of the mounts connected smooching in love, Last year on our vacation I told my grandson Daniel, It must be a love affair gifted from God up above. The most unique mountains seen in North America, And has captured tourists to see Mother Nature so great, I’ve educated my daughter from the Encyclopedia Britannica, Wow, Colorado sure holds beauty within its dignified state! Date Written: June 17, 2016

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Date: 6/19/2016 8:30:00 AM
Back to convey my congratulations on a beautiful win:)
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Date: 6/18/2016 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Luloo!
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Date: 6/18/2016 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations to you, sweetie.
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Date: 6/18/2016 5:30:00 PM
So lovely and full of imagery, Luloo. I really enjoyed your poem...I've been there twice, and it is one of our favorite places. Congrats on your placement in this Premiere Contest. ~7~ Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/18/2016 5:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem for beautiful places.....Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest.....
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:52:00 AM
The pictures reveal such beauty and your poem describes it perfectly:)
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:14:00 PM
many thanks Jo :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 9:57:00 PM
I have driven up Pike's Peak before... it's beautiful but kind of scary driving up lol and the Garden of the God's is amazing. Your poem is really great, a beautiful place for sure. Well done
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:14:00 PM
oh my word I know the drive is crazy scary! I was up there three times and each time I held my breath lol, thanks Becca :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 8:27:00 PM
some of these names sound so familiar to me, maybe for the vacation I took years ago with my family when our stepdad was still alive. Old memories. And the mountains. Lovely.
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:12:00 PM
thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 6:50:00 PM
Beautiful pictures, beautiful words, sounds like a Colorado State Tourism Brochure! Now we all want to go!. Hope this does well!
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:11:00 PM
thank you John :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 5:27:00 PM
A beautiful poem for a beautiful place. Did you happen to drive on over to the royal gorge bridge?
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:10:00 PM
no I never did? I bet it's gorgeous! :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 5:13:00 PM
what visual language you create, lou... makes me want to get a ticket an experience colorado!.. huggs
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:09:00 PM
thank you Nette :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 4:34:00 PM
Oh Wow LuLOO I want to get on a plane and fly right over - such awesome images and imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 6/17/2016 6:02:00 PM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
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