The Mountain Stream

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A sight to behold Oh so serene. The sweet sound Of soothing tranquility Its flow, music to my ears! It whispers and speaks of peace Date written and posted: 08/20/2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 5:49:00 PM

Music to my ears too Edward it reminds me of the waterfalls we saw in Norway - a lovely one liner:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/24/2016 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, Jan:-)

John Fleming

Date: 8/22/2016 1:59:00 PM

Yes indeed! Nothing quite like the pouring-gurgle and magical tinkling of a crystal-clear mountain stream. Nicely summarized, Edward. My best regards - Cheers! :) john

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/24/2016 6:39:00 PM

Thank you, John...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2016 2:25:00 PM

- Lovely line, Edward - Luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2016 11:45:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine! xoxo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/21/2016 1:37:00 PM

I hear that mountain stream and feel the tranquility

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/21/2016 11:47:00 PM

Hi, Darlene:-) Glad you liked it...