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The Mountain Stream

A sight to behold
Oh so serene. The sweet sound 
Of soothing tranquility 
Its flow, music to my ears!
It whispers and speaks of peace


Date written and posted: 08/20/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Music to my ears too Edward it reminds me of the waterfalls we saw in Norway - a lovely one liner:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Thanks, Jan:-)
Fleming Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Yes indeed! Nothing quite like the pouring-gurgle and magical tinkling of a crystal-clear mountain stream. Nicely summarized, Edward. My best regards - Cheers! :) john
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Thank you, John...
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 2:25 PM
- Lovely line, Edward - Luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 11:45 PM
Thanks, Sunshine! xoxo
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 1:37 PM
I hear that mountain stream and feel the tranquility
Ibeh Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Hi, Darlene:-) Glad you liked it...
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