The Most Vulnerable

(Maverick Free Verse about a true life Maverick)

hey, Mr. Editor, you got it wrong
labeling Allen West as Congress’s “Most Vulnerable”
     misnomer
     insult to his character
 
ambush of American troops planned
Colonel West fired shots near an Iraqi prisoner’s head
     information obtained, ambush prevented 
     no blood shed, not even the prisoner’s
 
thankless military bureaucracy
forced him to retire
     Colonel West proclaimed,
     “The battlefield’s no place for political correctness”

“Don’t blow sunshine up my butt,” 
Maverick West warned, standing his ground
     refused to march 
     to a “Machiavellian Kumbaya”

had he been a West Point grad
West would have been promoted
     adorned with medals 
     accolades for soldiers saved

soldier’s mother spoke out; see it her way
“I hope my son’s commanders protect him as Allen did”
     behind a shield of political ties 
     Allen never hides

in a Democratic district this Tea Partier rose
disenfranchised Americans cheered
     do you think West deserves 
     beatings from the press
 
watch your “Most Vulnerable” 
rise to prominence
     if this hero hasn’t earned his seat in Congress
     Mr. Editor, tell me who has


 
* Allen West represents the Tampa area of Florida in the U.S. Congress.
In 2003, when West was a battalion commander in Taji, Iraq, he fired his weapon 
near the head of a prisoner to frighten the detainee into divulging information about 
a planned ambush. The detainee started providing information and the ambush of 
American soldiers was prevented.  West was removed from command and the Army 
considered a court martial. West argued he acted to save his troops, was fined 
$5,000, but was allowed to retire with full honors and benefits.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brumley Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Sounds like a bunch of bleeding heart liberals who take everything for granted to me. Same thing that's eating up the whole country like a malignant cancer. And they wonder why the economy is so sick! It's because the morals and priorities of the nations leaders are completely out of perspective with reality. Sad, but sadly accurate.
Song Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Carolyn, I knew this poem would rank high. Awesome! You captivated me with this write when you first released it. We aren't privileged to know the details of war and unfortunately to maintain our political correctness we must create fall guys. West is the hero. The Army officials were the cowards! Keep writing the truth! Gwendolen
Oimbo Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 10:54 AM
this poem is highly journalistic or rather has the fine elements of journalism or so i tend to rule. but this is just an expert way of writing conversational poetry. i like it.
Fahey Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 6:34 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win!!!! Wonderful!! Ellen
Aul Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Congrats on a great write..........George
Laan Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Carolyn, this is wonderful, so well deserved:)))
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st Place win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 4:26 AM
Super congrats for this lovely write dear friend.
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 3:16 AM
great show on earth.. a topper, carols..congrats fpr the gols! :) huggss, nette
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Wow!! Carolyn. You're wining right and left. Great subject and great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Frayer Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 7:39 PM
Look at you with your awe inspiring piece at the very top of the heap:) Congratulations on the contest Carolyn you deserve it luv ~Virginia
Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Congrats with this wonderful winning poem, Carolyn loved it first time round. Harry
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations on the first win in the contest of John, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Another beautiful and inspiring piece Carolyn. Congratulations on your poem's worthy honor in first place. Agape, Moses
Loving Iii Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 10:36 AM
that's where the presidential pardon comes in. right? john
Rams Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:48 PM
there is a lot of controversy about this man, and not being into politics , i don't understand. but if what you say is true, then i must agree that he handled the situation beautifully. ya florida !
Goff Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:18 PM
great story! my friend! hold your torch high! many will follow your bravery....& I'll be in the front! jimbo
Roberts Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:34 PM
soup mail
Horne Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:22 PM
I'm sorry to hear those sad ones were based on real life : ( But at least you got some great poems out of it all : ) Jack
Horne Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Thanks for all your encouragement, Carolyn - I'd never tried a ballade before - it was tricky but it wasn't quite as hard as it looked, I thought. I loved your Prince of Thieves. Do you always write about real experiences or purely fiction - or a mixture of both?
Roberts Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:08 PM
John Wayne would have shot him in the leg and we would have all cheered, you do what you have to do, and if you go to my profile I have uploaded a pic of a couple hobbit houses
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March 9, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Great write my friend. Brilliant and bold as the Poetry should be. You have highlighted an issue, which would give a new life and hopes to its Hero Ex Commander Allen West. I do agree that Poetry is not only to sing the songs of love and passion. Highlighting the flaws of our modern system is also the responsibility of a creative Poet. I really adore such efforts. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Carolyn Devonshire.
Austin Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 10:03 AM
Politics, yes. It's who you know and it always has been. I've been in some very lucrative places in the past because of some high person I knew. Hats off to Allen West. Love, Dave
Hardy Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Outstanding write, and being true is even better....I am a fan of yours....my friend was Tom Bell, I adored him.......
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Yes, Carolyn, you did enjoy my poem Red and Pink but I revised it to fit the contest of Linda, sharp memory you have. My compliments... and thanks for my placement in your March Madness and my March madness is based on the real event of the year 2000 in Windsor, Canada. So happy about it and my lasting remembrance, till date
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