Andrea Dietrich Poet Sijo

The Most Beautiful

A classic beauty was his luxury Buick Riviera,
the name of which would never have stayed with me but for the fact
it became a carriage that transported me into magic. 

His kisses were smoother than the leather seats on which we embraced.
As I gazed into the eyes of the most beautiful face -
that night and even the name of his car -were seared into my brain.

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Phyllis Babcock October 7, 2014 at 11:23 PM I bet a lot was seared into in those magical moments. lol Nice one. love phyl

Maurice Yvonne October 7, 2014 at 9:23 PM Boy this one of the two styles for your competition. This is a challenging form. I better start working on it tommorow. This is really good, I don't think I could reach this level of excellence.

Robin Davis July 26, 2014 at 11:34 AM Andrea This is a charming and unique write. Full of passion, love, and romance. Thank you for the nice comment on my Tragic Love poem. Yes, I am happily married. Today is my 28th anniversary.

Poet Destroyer A July 25, 2014 at 7:51 PM Andrea, it was a joke. did you not read my comment.. I was trying to get your attention... HEHEHE, how else would I tap you on the shoulder, to check out my latest. It's not as if I'm online as much... Your haiku, was perfect... Linda

Joe Maverick July 19, 2014 at 3:09 PM Yes it's a good one here Andrea, and thanks for the memory..'

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera July 13, 2014 at 4:22 AM this work appear as beautiful as the most beautiful

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 7:38 AM beautiful, sweet and touching write Andrea.. :D! Indeed it place you as a WINNER again!!! and yes am loving this fun poetry type :D thanks to Nette and Debbie who introduced this to us here.. :D!//olive eloisa :D

Monterey Sirak July 12, 2014 at 6:31 AM Beautiful memories expressed in your own amazing style.

Robert Nehls July 12, 2014 at 5:54 AM Hi, Andrea. I commented on this a few days ago but I guess it didn't work. Looks like the total scene to transport one into magic. I owned a Buick Wildcat back in 1969 and it suited my personality perfectly at that time. Love this one, my friend.... Robert.

Paul Callus July 12, 2014 at 3:58 AM Another beautiful leaf in the book of memories. You never fail to come up with the right idea which you manage to express in your own special way. I notice that this is a winning poem....very merited; congrats! // paul

Debbie Guzzi July 11, 2014 at 7:36 PM Ah I thought this might be you or Carrie I really appreciated the concrete image of the classic car - ah I even saw the shining chrome in your eyes ... Congrad's Light & Love

Faye Gibson July 11, 2014 at 2:02 PM Oh, this is just tooooo good, Andrea. Love it. Congratulations.

Justin Bordner July 11, 2014 at 2:00 PM Sultry eyes, heart glowing skys. Thats what I call erotic mnemonics Andrea. J.A.B.

Lucilla Carrillo July 11, 2014 at 9:06 AM This was a beauty of a poem. I could just picture it. I had a Buick La Saber. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

John Lawless July 11, 2014 at 6:51 AM Talk about being on the hot seat. Interesting take on the theme. I bet you weren't thinking of writing a Sijo that night.

Verlena S. Walker July 11, 2014 at 5:20 AM Nice Andrea... Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 11, 2014 at 4:10 AM N back again wid big congrats Andrea! Awesome write, Perfect win //Upma//

Vesna Kovrlija July 11, 2014 at 1:49 AM So passionate and romantic!

Robert Lindley July 10, 2014 at 9:59 PM My first was on a nice hand sewn quilt(her granny's) under a huge shade tree about a mile from my house. I had met my gal there as she had planned and she gave me something I wasn't expecting! Sure seared my brain!!! Fantastic write my friend!! BBBBravoooooo!!!!!

Robert Johnson July 10, 2014 at 9:37 PM Can't beat that Buick ride. :) Peace. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 10, 2014 at 1:40 PM Truly romantic Andrea my dear friend! Past days r history now,, memorable ,, gl in contest!

Daver Austin July 10, 2014 at 9:02 AM Love in a buick Riviera. Brings back memories. Good stuff, Andrea. Love, Dave

Peter Dome July 10, 2014 at 7:41 AM OOh. lucky man. great write much enjoyed take care best wishes Pete

Arlene Smith July 10, 2014 at 6:48 AM Sounds as tho you found your prince and he had nice wheels!.. Beautiful write Andrea! I expect to see this a winner for sure.. Hugs.. Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2014 at 5:43 AM - Wooow .... Andrea .... "The most beautiful" poem !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2014 at 5:45 AM - Yes, and it was so beautiful!! Sara Kendrick July 10, 2014 at 5:43 AM I finished Melody Rules

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