The Most-Wanted Height and Most-Needed Heart

THE MOST-WANTED HEIGHT & MOST-NEEDED HEART

Do women miss out on a good man
because of height & forget God's plan? 

Most definitely yes, of course,
and shamelessly so without remorse.
I feel for such women & their plight
of not setting their priorities RIGHT. 
On a norm, everyone set priorities,
but not all set them right, bar minorities.
This high man, with a great thing to pursue, 
Dies 'ere his manly character without rescue. 
That low man goes on adding one to one
and making many more mouth cheer on. 

Do women miss out on a good man
because of height & forget God's plan? 

They ignore the man who can meet despair 
and face defeat with a cheer, 
without venting, suffocating yet not losing.
Inadvertently, that's the man of God's choosing; 
The man whose low gravity defiles the laws of gravity,
One who achieves with brevity & unambiguity,
The man who can fight to Heaven's height
on his knees and diffuse all your fright.
Gushing for the big man & feelings on the loose;
What a size says the size of his shoes 

but crumbling down the rose at her height,
So with her dream man who lacks a heart,
his power & beauty forever take flight. 

What you WANT rivals what you NEED.
Uneasy as it is, let your desires concede
to the needs that are required for life to proceed.
What most women WANT is a good height 
but what they mostly NEED is a good heart.


VICK  MANUEL  POETRY {VMP}
Form: Rhymes
Copyright ©? 22nd July 2023.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/22/2023 4:22:00 PM
Most of the time long poems make me sleepy. Unless they make sence, sound poetic, and speaks wisely. This one fits the bill so much I put it in my fav group. It made me think of me while I read. Why women don't pick me? I've had a few girlfriends but spent most of my life alone for I think this explanation.
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Date: 7/24/2023 3:40:00 AM
Thanks for reading till the end. I'm glad the poem resonates. The issue of choice in height is very common among today's women and whether agreed or not, it's base. The point is, any lady that doesn't value heart rather than height, isn't made for you, no matter how much you love or cherish her.
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