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The Mosaic

The portrait of marriage a Mosaic, Made from hundreds of pieces, Large and small but all of the Same importance, Together put In A masterful way for the desired outcome To attain: The completion of the portrayal of A relationship, a life to last Unfortunately, No one has ever been blessed all Pieces to amass As To perfection the given portrait to Produce For Always some parts will be missing or Not the desired ones would be in the Right place Thus The portrait never gets done to The artist’s complete satisfaction However, A good artist has to keep in mind the Essential parts That Should never be missed from any mosaic Of the sort: Trust escorted by honesty Selfishness coupled with admiration Sensuality tied with affection Love united with devotion And The X factor, that the majority never Under consideration takes: Synchronicity For Without it, all efforts will sooner or later, Fail! © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 OCTOBER 2014

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Date: 10/9/2014 7:39:00 PM
your really drawing picture now smiling dear pal very beautiful pen
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 12:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Liam!
Date: 10/9/2014 12:17:00 PM
- This is "the perfect marriage", Demetrios !!! - Really beautiful words - I wish more thought as you describe it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 12:41:00 AM
My friend, Anne Lise, thank you for your kind visit and gracious comment!
Date: 10/8/2014 6:44:00 PM
Dear Demetrios, Indeed, the "mosaic" never seems perfect. My late husband always said I was too independent, but it was a little thing that never came between us. I like the "ingredients" in your recipe for a perfect union. Synchronicity, feeling the same way at the same time, is often elusive, but some people seem to find it. Thanks for writing; I returned your Soup Mail. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:53:00 PM
Perfect word for word.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/8/2014 6:46:00 PM
I agree, Maurice. It takes a wise person to identify all of the things that make a union work!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 1:09:00 PM
Are you married, mon ami, Maurice? Thank you my friend, Maurice for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 10/8/2014 3:39:00 AM
Demetrios, Another quite special and most meaningful write here mein guter freund!! The Relationship, Right Place, Essential Parts, and Synchronicity are indeed all key, all-purposeful in making this majestic mosaic a complete one!! Great Write here!! And a most deserved "7" from me. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 5:12:00 AM
Danke sehr mein gutter freund, Gary, for your visit and the honoring comment! I appreciate it!

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