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The Morning Is Still

The morning is still So is her heart No wind or breeze Nowhere to start Her babe reclaimed End without meaning A dawn so dark No light intervening The morning is still And so is her child Now as he rests In her heart, so mild In memory of my brother, Jon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/27/2017 1:22:00 PM
Oh ..so.. sad this poem is sad.I had tears in my eyes when reading. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2017 8:25:00 PM
xoxoxo to you as well.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/27/2017 5:15:00 PM
Than you Darlene, I appreciate you kind words, xxxooo
Date: 8/12/2017 10:25:00 PM
Hi Mike, a moving tribute of a heartbreaking situation beautifully written. Thanks for sharing your personal emotional experience.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/13/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank so much Susan
Date: 8/12/2017 9:35:00 AM
Oh Mike, what a heartfelt poem for your brother. It really reaches the reader! Well done.
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